|Reviews for The Return of the Father|
| Sarah chapter 37 . 3/3
Just a quick note: Tonks suggested that Voldemort might want a "Black" and you did mention that the Death Eaters had Narcissa and Bellatrix in their ranks, but Tonks would have already known that because they're her aunts. Bellatrix was the oldest, Andromeda the middle, and Narcissa the youngest. Just a technicality that you probably already knew.. Other than that, it was great. :)
| Guest chapter 22 . 3/1
I was picturing Snape screaming in horror like a little girl, but this is great.
| TammyGreen chapter 43 . 2/15
OH MY GOD
YOU CAN'T JUST FREAKING LEAVE IT THERE
| pj.hp.sh.a.dw.fangirl.CHOCCY.2 chapter 43 . 2/13
normally i would be reluctant to follow a story that hasn't been updated for two years, but given the previous update times, i am willing to see if this will be continued
Please do continue this as it is very good
| Katharina Liebe chapter 43 . 2/10
I really really hope that you decide to eventually update because this is seriously the best HP fanfiction I've ever read. It's like reading J.K. Rowling herself. And the story line is just plain fantastic. I just really love the story and it would be nice if it could eventually be finished. Best wishes and thanks for sharing!
| anonymous chapter 43 . 1/20
please update. this is beautiful
| Guest chapter 43 . 1/18
It's been 4 years.! I've done my WAITING!
when's the next chappie due?
| long live marshmallows chapter 1 . 1/12
This just HOOKED me in. Hopefully I can stop long enough to finish some school work and then get back to it.. in like... (checks the number of chapters) ... holy... shoot.
Anyways. I really love the ending, where James suddenly appears, and he's just.. there.
| JustAReider chapter 29 . 1/10
You said that harry's grandma was an only child but later she suddenly plays pranks with her sisters?
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/29/2013
| Leicesterrider chapter 24 . 12/29/2013
I put the password into google translate and Dimicatio Lumen means fencing light, not light battle
| Eternalpotter chapter 43 . 12/17/2013
You haven't updated in 3 years. What are you playing at? Come on please ?
| kittyrsocute chapter 43 . 12/11/2013
Even if se're an entire universe away, we believe in you Harry. (I know I sound like a loony, but he really could be out there in some other universe. Fighting Voldemort or just living his life. You never know.)
| SummerRyne chapter 43 . 12/10/2013
Great story! I hope you get around to finishing it.
| kittyrsocute chapter 17 . 12/9/2013
Dursley's getting their butts kicked... such a beautiful image! I wonder how many different colors they can make Vernon change...