|Reviews for Loser Makes Good|
| aspirer chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
yes. yes yes yes yes YES. you are my hero. i am a rabid darco fan, and was kinda apprehensive about this, but...wow. just...wow. i need more. more please. very soon?
| itsasledgehammer chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
This has sparked my interest. Marco and Jay...
More please. I'm intrigued now.
| MirrorKisses chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
-throws hand into air casually and smiles- I like the language...it's so graphic and Jayish.F this and F ,if it wasnt for the fact that the N is so goody goody they'd probally have Jay cuse out the girl scouts.-I was one-.I loved it and can't wait for the next wow,Jarco rox!
| Jade Danielle chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
OMG realy good. And I love Marco's sense of humor in your story. LMAO! :P
| Staargirly chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
I bow down to you, Jemppy! Another fabulous Jay/Marco story. You're going to continue this right? You have to. It's so perfect. The characters, the setting, the dialogue, the observations, it's all perfect! I don't think I need to say more.
| Potato Chippy Weezer chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Ohh...I like. Not only do I love your writing style, but the hormonal teenage girl in me just loves the Marco/Jay pairing. HAWT! LOL! Anywho, great first chapter, I can't wait to read more -
| Empty With You chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
Damn, you beat me to a Jay/Marco. LoL. This is better than anything I could've written. I really like this and I can't wait for you to write more. This pairing is extremely interesting, and I love the way you're portraying Jay. This looks great so far, so continue as soon as possible.
| Kate chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
I loved the story and the warning you wrote- That IS Jay. This is by far one of the best ships, next to JT/Liberty.
| Dreamer'sWasteland chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
Hm... I'd really like to see more of this. Jay/Marco is a pretty rare pair-up and I think this fic's got potential.
| Enigmus chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
well well well we meet again Jemppy this story is great and you had better continue this or I will be extremly upset I'm not kidding I absolutely luv Jay and Marco almost as much as I luv Marco and Spin but,and don't take this the wrong way, I very much dislike Marco and Dylan they don't belong together so anywa once again story was excellent and plez continue
| Kaitlinbell chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
Ah!Wah! You make me want to read more of them. Seriously, I mean I should have saw it coming after Disaffected...but man...you get better with each one you write! I seriously do love your work. It's amazing. What I like the most, is that you take a character that many usually hate and you give them plausible reasons behing their actions and a different view...to the point you're totally on their side. Persuasive. And beautiful. Keep it up lovely!
| anjel919 chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
Great start...I want more! Please...southern upbringing rears its head... I love the style of writing. Keep writing.