Heck... characters can grow even if it doesn't take 500 years... I think you created a wonderful tale that was very realistic in the interpretation of how Sesshomaru changed over time as he discovered that he was fated to fall just like his father and brother. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

wow... I really injoyed the story. It is a masterpiece, and while its a bit late congrates on completing such a tremendous one shot.

Hi - I really liked this story! Very well written and I liked that it was sort of depressing, but had a happy ending! Ja ne!

WONDERFUL STORY~~~~ This was amazing! One of my favorites! You're very talented, Yume-sama. :D

That was beautiful. I was at first wary about reading such a long one-shot, but it's all worth it! Amazing...

cute

Wow, you rocked that. :) yes, it was OOC some and I have read similar plots before... But you've pulled off this story better than any before you, so congrats! Plus, I really liked the poem you based this story on. It really set the stage and made any OOC-ness acceptable in my eyes :) I love how you ended it, with that last line to tie in the whole theme. "Even immortals fall." I got goosebumps. :D thx for the read.

i simply love this chap.

it made me all sappy and stuff but it was awesome! 3

YOU DID A FANTASTIC JOB! I WAS NEARLY IN TEARS BY THE END OF THE STORY! WONDERFUL ONE-SHOT! MORE PLEASE!

namara-ashina from DA

BEAUTIFUL STORY!

so sad yet so sweet!

one of the best sess/kag fics i've ever read!

loved it tnx for writing it!

What a thoughtfully written story you put together. I think it does very well as a 'one-shot'. You presented scenery, characters, and the like in excellent description and prose. You fleshed out your story very well and planned ahead. I had watery tear ducts, with an 'aw' to boot.

Bea-u-ti-ful! This was absolutely and utterly masterful, excellent, superb, brilliant, and just plain...fun! Domo arigato- this made me smile!

WOW! That was intense-sly good lol