Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces
Brasuki chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
You sick motha...mastrabating dog licking ...

Did R. Kelly pour Doo Doo Butter on you or something?
Somebody You Don't Know chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
Wow... that was ultra shitty... sorry babe. I think you can do better...
pleasetakemeawayfromhereox chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
kol good story!
xvfjslhcvljshxgvjlhsgdkhg chapter 1 . 1/21/2006
oh my sweet jesus

no never again just no usick bastard

u go kill ur self im sure
Darkwolves chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
I honestly thought that this one-shot was good and very deep. Although I don't like the Sango/Kohaku pairing, this was...cool. A tad bit dark,(Which to me is a good thing) yet it gets a close look at Sango's pain and fears.

Hope you don't mind if I add you to my favorite author's list.
S-Michael chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
poetry. pure poetry, the way that you take what is dark and morbid and show us the beauty of it. pure poetry.
marthfan1102 chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
O.o Weird. Really really weird.
DLC Fan chapter 1 . 7/21/2005
This story was beatifully written. I loved it. I was little shock to find a Sango/Kohaku pairing, and so I decided to check it out. I have to admit that I liked no matter how much I want to deny it. The way you wrote it was amazing though the intimate moment between the two was a little weird...I guess I should say, but I have to give you a lot of respect for doing a pairing like that. .

Demon
Pingouin chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
Dude, gross!
Sally Sells Seashells chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Wow, this was really powerful. You really get inside the mind of Sango. Great job.
Dracosgirl292 chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
did they screw? oh well that is really sad!
Ikuko-chan chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
This is also very difficult to understand...all the writing is very depressing...I really like stories like it...I try and try to write a good story just like it but I never seem to succeed...you are like my writing idol...this writing is just so...words cannot describe it
charming chapter 1 . 2/25/2005
i in my own cherised opinion don't belive sango and her brother will get together and i'm not keen on a brother and sister doing those sort of things but i loved the wrighting and how it was put and yea...not a lot of peps flamed you there huh

ja ne
MakatoMai chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
so sad...very well-worded...its excillent work, keep it up
Tory chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Umm. What just happened here? O_O was it what I think it was?
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