Reviews for AU: A Hero's Choice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Work on your English instead of sarcastically acting as if we like cliffhangers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate chi chi |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait a minute... but Cell already tried to absorb Android 16 and it didn't work since he was fully mechanical. How did he absorb him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() -Oghma Infinium |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter and plot and idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm impressed. Looking back at this, it seems every time you write a new story, you reach a new level of quality! I wish I had the perseverance to good at writing. I hope you get back to writing because your stories are good stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you really improved in the re-write (I read that first) you can tell here and there how your wrting improved and that you corrected little errors. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've always thought that someone should write a story about Hogan becoming a full blooded saiyan and you've done that bravo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting, very fast paced and a lot of deaths,focused on saiyans mostly but that's okay I suppose. I like us SSJ5 concept, just as coo as the silver haired one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't want to burst your bubble but Cell can't absorb 16 for the simple fact that he is a complete android, not an altered human like 17 and 18. There would be no genetic material for him to absorb, just a bunch of circuits and machinery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more) |
![]() ![]() exiting wasn't it! |
![]() ![]() Mack gohan ssj4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story and as well as the one mostly about gohan when goku trains him from a younger age. You've done a great job and I can't wait to read more of your work. Thanks for the great read man. |