Work on your English instead of sarcastically acting as if we like cliffhangers.

I hate chi chi

Wait a minute... but Cell already tried to absorb Android 16 and it didn't work since he was fully mechanical. How did he absorb him?

-Oghma Infinium

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

Cool

I'm impressed. Looking back at this, it seems every time you write a new story, you reach a new level of quality! I wish I had the perseverance to good at writing. I hope you get back to writing because your stories are good stuff!

you really improved in the re-write (I read that first) you can tell here and there how your wrting improved and that you corrected little errors. Good job!

I've always thought that someone should write a story about Hogan becoming a full blooded saiyan and you've done that bravo

Interesting, very fast paced and a lot of deaths,focused on saiyans mostly but that's okay I suppose. I like us SSJ5 concept, just as coo as the silver haired one.

I don't want to burst your bubble but Cell can't absorb 16 for the simple fact that he is a complete android, not an altered human like 17 and 18. There would be no genetic material for him to absorb, just a bunch of circuits and machinery.

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

exiting wasn't it!

Mack gohan ssj4

I really enjoyed this story and as well as the one mostly about gohan when goku trains him from a younger age. You've done a great job and I can't wait to read more of your work. Thanks for the great read man.