Reviews for The First Snow
nayin17 chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
awwww cute
nayin chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
I wish this is longer
bigmac2759 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
This is a beautiful little story.
angelps7 chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
aw that was so cute it made me want to cry!
viggo chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
very cute fic
LesPaul12 chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
this was a very good/awesome romance fic
James1110 chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Ok heres my take on it. You need to write more. My advice is to take it from here and make a story where like Harry and Ginny are maddly in love. Make it to where Voldemort nerely kills Harry while Ginny is watching, and then Harry makes his come-back and kills Voldemort. If you dont keep writeing on this. I'll

rw-write this in some diffrent words and make it my own. So my addvice is to use it well.

-James
HiddenFlame42 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Awesome fic! Very Ginny and very cute too. Fave line: Honestly I’m not use to being treated like a sack of potatoes by Harry but I can truthfully say that I didn’t mind. Heehee, and I loved the image of Ron running around to find Hermione so he could kiss her and then use the bathroom in peace. Lol, gotta love the Twins! :P
Wrinkles the Troll chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
*gaspsgigglesgasps*

Astounding
saintjimmyelmo chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
that was soo sweet! you need to write more like that! i loved it!
Ame no Majo chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
This was good. ~EG~
DRadFan chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
OKAY LAIN YOU WANT AN IDEA I'LL GIVE YOU AN IDEA WRITE A NOVEL! No, really. Have you ever thought about writing a songfic? You would probably be brilliant at those. And of course, you like fluff, so make a Harry/Ginny story where they meet after so many years at camp or something. An acually give it some action. More detail and other girls being jealous or total bitches. NOW WRITE A NOVEL!
mizzyfreak7 chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
hi

i like your story a lot, but did you know

that it is posted under gilderoy lockheart/hermione granger?

just thought you might like to know

cheers,

katherine
banana juice chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
snort i am a pig and i think your storey was piggy
hplovesme chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
I loved it, Harry's so romantic! You guys are great, write more!

Your Biggest Fan,

Casey
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