Reviews for Eldritch Asylum |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mister fox, this is one of the most beautifully written stories I've ever read. I love how you've made Ranma, and I'm hoping for a Male x Female Ranma pairing (I know, I'm crazy). |
![]() ![]() *sigh* great chapter and all, but i'm wondering if you'll make another within the year |
![]() ![]() My god, do you enjoy boring the hell out of your readers? If your boring prose wasn't bad enough, your obsession over dull events saps all entertainment into a black, vapid abyss. Nobody cares what breakfast items Ranma is eating nor whether the Sunday paper has ads in it. Any action you do have is marred by comically bad onomatopoeias and childish antics. Calling this story passive is a massive understatement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love both of your fics and humbly ask for moar! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is simply awesome! I'm loving it! I can hardly WAIT for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() i love it; the plot, the mystery, the horror, the hellsing crossover, and the personality I especially look forward to the sorting though; I can just imagine the hat being put on her and starting to look through her mind. First her recent memories of her fights would shock it,then it would eventually reach the memories of ranma saotome shocking it again (and possibly causing her to remember) finally it would reach the link to the shadow mistress(just what i choose to call her) and just start screaming until someone takes it off. Then when they take it off it starts ranting about "a Great One" and be generally horrified. When asked for further explaination it would mention "dark rulers of the universe" and start screaming again, then the shadow mistress would erase everybody's memories and make them think she was sorted into gryffendor. it probably won't work with your plans but could you please make it an omake update more frequently please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, great to see how things appear to be going with Ranma here, and looking forward to where he gets sorted into what house. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How potent is the philosopher's stone's healing properties? -"Well, that's stuffed!" Ranma announces, her act -evaporating in an instant. "Didn't you get to fight -a basilisk last year?" *snicker* |
![]() ![]() Like the fic and would like to see more. I'm not sure how you plan to mix the muggle world of Ranma with the magical world but I expect you have some idea |
![]() ![]() ![]() took you guys long enough... :P seriously, though, this is an amazing fanfiction that seems to only get better as it goes on. excellent craftsmanship on your part, i'd say. how soon of an update can we expect? i certainly don't want to wait several months, even if it is this good. keep writing you slackers! -Boris P.S.: judging from your forum, you guys seem to work exceptionally hard on this, so don't be offended by little 'ol whiny me |
![]() ![]() nice prologue... i really enjoyed that... nice work...i will be reading more deffinetely |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry about the late late review. I've read this chapter a few days ago and i've been putting off the review since I wanted to make it worthwhile for you to read(but i'm too lazy). Anyways Thank you, thank you, and thank you for the update. This story really shows people that all great authors need,such as you two, to write a great story is just characters and some background information. All of this is just amazing to read since i've never really seen it done before in any other fic. Keep up the great work obsidian-fox and Xylix this story along with others keeps me up to writing my own fic. :) gl and i'll be looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() How very like Snape to castigate the children over conditions imposed by the very institution he represents.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story man. Keep up the writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this newest chapter though I'm lost in a few places. But as it's been said before, time reveals all things. Excellently done. |