I learned several new words for "black" from this chapter and the last. Did you use a thesaurus for this, or do you just have an enviable vocabulary? Regardless, you're an excellent writer, and it's a shame you're not continuing (unless, of course, you're doing so professionally now: if that's the case I congratulate you).

This is quite an excellent work, shame it's dead. Thanks for having written this much anyway. You're quite good at the Lovecraftian feel (although that wasn't exhibited overmuch in this chapter; more so in previous ones).

Awww, dead? Why dead? This was easily one of the best Fanfics ever! ;.;

A simply magnificent story. I pray that oneday you'll take it back up.

Just got back from overseas and noticed my favorite story seems to have stoped hope it's not abandoned. If so thanks for starting a great story

Such an Epic Fic, I do hope that it will be continued

because is a masterpiece that would make the world a better place,

with its completion.

But alas with all great fics it seams that they are destined to be unfinished... Pleas break the monotony and complete this... This... THIS MASTERPIECE!

Cleverly written, the crossover should be clunky but you both make it work. Instead of an element forced in you seamlessly seem to pull off the gloss and reveal the dark beneath.

Not too many criticisms, you've mentioned Ranma is neither male nor female but Ranma, so I'll give time to get to that. I confess I see only the most overt bits, and not what I assume to be the boy inside.

Anyway, reviewing on the hope this isn't a dead fic. Its a brilliant collaborative effort guys.

Very Very good story, I sooooo hope you continue it!

The Alucard part was fun but every time I read about Mary I couldn't avoid thinking about Nabiki Tendo.

You do know that on average its only fractionally more than 88 people paying admission per chapter right?

You talked about things planned out for future chapters in the time line. But it appears you also are getting or have gotten stuck after sorting. Why does that happen to so many Potter crosses?

Daniel Thomas Stack

Spokavriel yahoo. com

Love the story! I mean, I've seen it around before but I've never bothered to give it any mind because...well...I was stupid and...a good number of HP related fanfictions didn't appeal to me. However, I had run out of things to read and came across your story again and decided to give it a try.

It made me realize how judgmental and stupid I was for not following the little adage of "Don't judge a book by it's cover"...

So last night I began reading it at about 9PM...it kept me up until 6AM without me knowing it because of how addicting and magnificent your story is...but now I wish I hadn't read it because it hasn't been updated in 3 years...and it's going to drive me a little nuts not being able to continue reading this story. It's...at a professional level, the quality of it.

Anyhow, I hope you update again! .

Signed,

Kit the (Not so) Fiendish Fire Cat~!

I have been enjoying this story, but I think that the long explanation of Ranma's past was very weak. It seemed like a cop-out-a way to easily get across a lot of information without Ranma (or the reader, or writer for that matter) having to work at it.

I've read many Ranma 1/2 fanfiction's, and none seemed to capture my attention like this one. It is by far the best dark Ranma 1/2 fanfiction out there in my opinion, and I would love to see this fic come back to life.

Though this is probably 100% dead... I really hope you come back one day...

A Fan,

Kevin

This is really amazing I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!

Interesting please continue!