Reviews for Eldritch Asylum
reality deviant chapter 9 . 9/30/2011
a great story, though i think too meny crossovers is tasteless...

pls update soon and show hermione ranma ron and harry meeting.

and who is that dark goddess?
john1234 chapter 9 . 7/24/2011
Shame this story is abandoned - it's original and quite good. I'm not sure if something happened to you in real life, so I won't presume on anything. Still, hopefully this story does get updated again as it would be a shame to see such potential wasted.
wert1990 chapter 9 . 5/28/2011
please revive this great storry
2313021 chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
It truly is a shame this was abandoned...I was greatly enjoying this. right up until the last chapter stopped me dead.
Catoust chapter 7 . 3/30/2011
I like. But I haven't had chills from this yet. Ranma a killer! Yeesh, s/he's starting to turn into Ryouga; not caring for bystanders at all...

Oddly enough, the song I was listening to coincided with my pace and the story.
joshlamont chapter 9 . 3/14/2011
I know this story is ancient as hell, but it would be fantastic if you continued! I love your depiction of Ranma as both exceedingly dangerous and a pesky little sister, and I'd love to see how she gets on in Slytherin!
steve chapter 7 . 2/7/2011
you have a great story come along and I hope you continue it.
Belle chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
I'm having trouble wrapping my head around how Hellsing fits into the Harry Potter continuum. Especially since the vampire in both are different. Hellsing as far as I can tell has FREAK vamps, while HP has vamps as only vaguely threatening and monitored by the ministry.
Alice chapter 6 . 1/23/2011
I really liked Ranma's conversation with that guy about dreams and if the world we live in is just a dream, and how would we know. I particularly liked stance on author and dreams, and how just because it isn't mentioned, doesn't mean it doesn't happen. I have dreams where suddenly something is mentioned to be a color, and the fact that there is color is suddenly brought to the forefront of my mind, instead of hanging around in the back of my mind because it didn't matter until it was mentioned and given importance. It reminds me of the book The Giver, because the author goes out and says around halfway through the book that only the protagonist sees color. If the author hadn't written that only the person could see color, then if there was color or not wouldn't have mattered because I would have assumed that everyone could see color. I like it when authors get philosophical, because it excites me and gets me thinking about many different things. So thank you for writing Ranma's conversation about psychology.
Brine chapter 7 . 1/21/2011
Okay you have a reason for introducing hellsing into the combination of the mythos tragedy ranma 1/2 comedy, but hellsing is in the essential Greek forms a romance, which is to say you have all 3 basic dramatic genres and you have to pick one eventually bad things happen because of the flaw, things just happen, or good things are destined to happen.

On a more basic note the introduction of Alucard/Dracula was a bit jarring: in that it disrupts the basic Ranma always wins concept. A Ranma infused with shadows, and with 2 extra years of practice isn't nerfed, she's stronger than ever, more so with a shadow goddess riding in the back of her head, having her quail not at the shadow or one of the ancient evils, but as at a devil we know corrodes the element of horror, or maybe it is that Alucard is rendered in such a recognizable way that does it. Calling Alucard out as Dracula with a callout to castlevania and then rendering him in his classic eldrich abbomination that we know cuts away from the horror for your fans who have seen or read hellsing. We're not afraid of him, he's the devil we know and root for, you need some deeper description of the impact or effectt that makes it not just a fantasy Vash the stampede threatening ruinous harm on the offender. I just did a quick read so I probably missed it, but the start of the gunfight is pretty confusing, it deserves a short paragraph of ranma's surprise at the gunfire erupting, because in a club like that no one not at the booth would notice a vampire burning to ash.

I'm looking forward to the next update.
LordsFire chapter 9 . 1/15/2011
This is easily one of the best written stories I have found on this site. Your character work and development is higher quality than quite a bit o 'proffessional' published work I've read. I hope you come back and finish this some time.
Sora with an S chapter 9 . 1/7/2011
Very dark, very enticing...

and apparently dead. Oh well.
nimb09 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
this is very good. the writing just drew me in. its just amazing. u r a very good writer.
JustinD chapter 9 . 11/11/2010
Highly enjoyable. I'm disappointed with myself for not reading this earlier. It is definitely going on to my favourites and alert lists in the hope that it'll be continued.
Hammerchuckery chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
Noes! It's dead!
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