|Reviews for Dino Crisis: Ibis Island and the Third Energy|
| JohnP87 chapter 4 . 12/6/2011
I was wondering if you are going to complete the story because I am really liking the outcome also I can't stand cliffhangers I want to see more what would happen can you try and complete it I am really enjoying the story also I have played the game already and I still like to read it I look forward to seeing more if possible
| charland77 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
hey this story is awesome, you should continue it
| charland77 chapter 4 . 6/13/2011
yo this story is great, when are you gonna add chapter five
| josue chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
You write excelent!
| tudor chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
a superb game... i'm waiting for another one on PC...
| Xzaviyer Hoffpauir chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
This is a very good start to an amazing game (I too am novelizing this game! :)) The mood is set a bit, and the cinematic sequences are good for a writing version. This having been said, I must suggest that the part where cooper is running to add a bit more emphasis on the fear. His mind is thinking a MILLION THINGS by the signs of his body language, and in this moment of confusion and terror, you must put into account what his BODY is going through. If I were to do this part, I would put emphasis on his nerves being rattled and his adrenaline pumping through his veins to better incorporate the true fear and confusion that befell Cooper before he was eaten alive... Overall though, I find this read very suiting for a novelization of a game that SHOULD have been novelized a LONG time ago... Keep up the good work, and make sure to REALLY get your readers jaws dropping, their mouths watering, and their eyes glued to the horror and mystery, of Dino Crisis! :)
| Michael chapter 4 . 1/10/2009
Nice story. It's very good. Please make another chapter. You know, it has been almost THREE years since you updated this story, and Dino crisis is HOW old? 19! I want to read more from you, but you'll have to kick it into high gear and get this shit done. Don't worry, that's the only complaint I have.
Just please, please, finish the story.
| Bluewolfdemon12 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
I liked this story, but the only thing you changed. Is that the T- Rex ate cooper, not thew him at the ground.
| Bluewolfdemon12 chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
This is a good story make more! I have the game and it is alright!
| TigerBoy77 chapter 2 . 10/11/2007
I love your story! I ave actually beaten the game several times so to hear this and to think about the game it makes me laugh. I can just picture them in my head saying all those things! Keep up the good story!
| seth chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Are you ever going to finish this one up? It would be a shame to let a good work go unfinished.
| Her Royal Nonsense chapter 4 . 4/21/2007
wow! this is such a fantastic novelization, and you're a very talented writer! it's such a shame that there are very few well-written dino crisis fics here, so i was definitely happy when i stumbled upon this. looking forward to more!
| Joe chapter 4 . 4/12/2007
Finish this novelization...
| dinocreview chapter 2 . 10/27/2006
This is a really good start, it follows the game well, and captures its feel nicely. However, I have a few suggestions, number one the puzzles were the most annoying part of the game, so I wouldn't clog the story with them, second show what the characters are thinking more and I don't mean there italizised thoughts, but describe the thoughts more abstractly, lastly, staying true to the story is one thing, but don't be afraid to shake things up, throw those of us who have the game memorized a few suprises, you have alot of freedom in fan fiction so use it.
All that said I really do love your story,and look forward to the next chapters.
| AuntieNora chapter 4 . 9/18/2006
Awesome! I never got this far in the game :( Pteranodons killed me.
Can't wait for the next chapter!