Reviews for She Tricked Me!
Sarra Torrens chapter 1 . 1/4
I suck at endings as well, center plot and beginning real well good, then bamf! totally toasted! But this was rather a good one so keep trying!
Prince Takeru chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
That was short, but nice.
Nachtsider chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Orokid, the name is spelt 'Ura', not 'Orra'. That aside, your story is by no means a bad attempt. Keep it up, buddy!