Reviews for This Present Darkness
Ammodytus chapter 61 . 5/12/2019
Great work!
Sfumina chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Hi. I hope you will read this someday.
So, I'm about to finish reading this fanfiction but I don't want to. As it happens to me while finishing amazing books I cannot push myself to read the last chapter because I don't want the story to end. I want it to remain forever on "reading", I want the feelings it gave me to linger over me forever. Foolish me, this happened with printed books, always written by famous authors and eventually I always knew how the story actually ends. I may not read the last chapter or paragraphs because anyway (foolish me as I said) I knew how it ends.
But now what should I do?
Your fanfiction is not worldwide famous, has not been discussed, reviewed or criticized by medias. This is not a book I can hold in my hand with its proper weight, cover, author brief description... But it should have. Seriously, let me talk more freely now: this should be sold in bookshops. I know, I know about copyrights issues etcetera... I'm just saying, we should find this is bookstores. The plot is so finely designed and coherent that I'm surprised when I see you've been writing this for 5 years. What kind of immense passion has lead you during those long years, what amazing determination and study to weave such complex events. The focus to details that fall together like a puzzle... I have images burnt in my mind from so many scenes you acutely described. Also moments, fractions of seconds or slight movements that carried huge meanings.
How I wanted to hug everyone in there at some point, how I missed the strong Legolas that held Arwen begging for help at the beginning of everything while he wandered broken and lost. Because in my opinion, you destroyed him in the finest way. Sounds funny but as it was painful to witness it was also SO MUCH FUN.
We, readers, are human after all. Our minds are twisted, after all.
In time I'll push myself to read the end... but now. Not still. I might re-read it first, in some time, because I feel I missed some layers. This is not, in fact, the first time I read it without finishing.
See you again then. In the meantime... thank you for this story.
Rookblonkorules chapter 16 . 4/11/2018
No, no, no, no, oh crap, he's been caught.
Rookblonkorules chapter 5 . 3/27/2018
I appreciate your warning. I've read too many fics that give no warning before launching into an explicit scene of some sort and though this wasn't explicit, I am still grateful for your warning.
"Aragorn put his head down on his arms and wept." I find myself pitying him. Whatever is going on with him, I want to see this resolved. I want to see OUR Aragorn back. Not this one, who'd hurt Arwen and honestly doubt her loyalty to him, accuse Legolas of... that. And... who knows what else by the time this story is through.
Rookblonkorules chapter 3 . 3/27/2018
Oh... this is bad... Yeah, this is bad.
Aragorn is going to get the wrong idea and that... that will not go over well.
Rookblonkorules chapter 2 . 3/27/2018
I love the banter between the two of them.
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 3/24/2018
So... I'm going to give this story a go. I can't promise I'll stick with it, because I've skipped ahead to see the warnings and... we'll see, I guess. But I'm giving it a go.
It already seems that something is off with Aragorn. And even with that frightening realization, we do have the knowledge that Arwen is pregnant? I'd congratulate the happy couple, but... they don't seem too happy right now.
Elwaith chapter 44 . 2/22/2018
I loved Aragorn's speech in this. He's right, killing the Corsairs and mistreating the other prisoners as well as the dead would only cause more of them to hate Gondor. I wish... real life leaders of countries could read that speech.

The part about Legolas was devastating. The fact that he hasn't spoken in days? But there are still many more chapters to go. There has to be some healing by then, at least some. There has to be.
Lireth chapter 61 . 12/19/2017
Wow. Just wow. I’ve devoured this story over the past few days, and I can honestly say it’s the best LotR fanfiction I’ve ever read - perhaps the best fanfic I’ve ever read period. I’ve been reading fanfiction for the past 15 years and I search high and low for quality stories about the fandoms I love...but this story blew me away. I wish I had a printed, bound copy on my shelf - this is more than a book in its own right. The superb characterizations, the way my emotions were manipulated, the realistic way the angsty scenes were dealt with and the believable consequences of the characters’ actions...just amazing. Thank you so much for the wild ride - I couldn’t put this story down, and I want to re-read it again and again. Doubtless I will over the years.

Did you ever publish your original story? I can’t find anything about it on your bio. I would buy it in a heartbeat, if this story is anything to go off of. In any case, I wish you luck if your future endeavors, and thank you again for this wonderful work!
Envy015 chapter 61 . 6/13/2017
This fic is brilliant. Incredible. I've hardly been able to take my mind off it in the three days since I started reading.
You put together a believable and well-written LOTR story using the characters flawlessly! Valar, your Legolas and Thranduil are so perfectly in-canon! I think Legolas is Thranduil's the only son, but, well, your story, your rules :)
The input you gave about the relationship between Legolas, Aragorn and Arwen will be a new head-canon for me.
Great work, thank you!
Celridel chapter 61 . 10/8/2016
It's been twelve years since you finished this. It is undeniable that this is the best fanfic ever made. You are one of those writers that have a skill that can't be told in words. Every character is beautiful, and I dare say Tolkien would be proud.
Thank you for giving us this!
Ithurielistic chapter 38 . 7/12/2016
I'm literally rocking back and forth on the floor. Holy heck. I just- I can't- holy heck.
Ithurielistic chapter 24 . 7/12/2016
I'm screaming rn holy crap
Ithurielistic chapter 15 . 7/12/2016
I can't look away. Oh god. The beautifully written and eloquent storytelling drew me in and now there is no escape O.O

(Sweet lord I love your stories)
Ithurielistic chapter 8 . 7/12/2016
I'm getting seriously scared rn. Aragorn has gone off the deep end!
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