Ever thought about making a come back and finishing this story i was eager for updates

há 14 anos que deve a continuação

Aww, I just got to the end of this chapter, anyways great story! I loved it.

Whether he wants to admit it or not Tenchi is the grandson of Yosho and is in line for the Throne of Jurai. Now I'm not sure if you are still here but so far I am impressed with this story and wish to see it finished

I like the entire story it sure made my day also here is some advice make sure you spell check on your words sometimes they are not in the right order but you have a good story keep it up and I look forward to seeing more chapters

After reading the whole story up until now in one sitting, I'll have to say that you have to keep writing. Even if its been 5 years there's always time to finish. Your story is awesome keep up the good work.

ACH where is the last chapter! What happens when they meet?

I have really enjoyed reading this story. Most of the fics out there are not as in depth, or use character(s) people have used many times before. So far a truly fun and engaging story. I hope to read more soon!

dude dude omg dude u need to finish i started reading this shit under bizcuit almost four yearsago and ur still not done i love the story but ur not done

I'm really into this and find out where their love goes. P.S: Out of high already college is rough, trust me.

you continue writing, and I continue to read and enjoy said writing. I still like the story up to this point, can't wait for the visiting parental units. On a side note, if they're so obsessed with her marrying some nobleman or high ranking person, maybe someone could perhaps slip in the fact that Tenchi is ROYALTY? I mean come on, if they want a high ranking politcal or powerful figure, he's the crown prince of the house of Jurai, the ruling powerhouse of the UNIVERSE, not to mention he has enough power to destroy a planet if he truly wanted to, can't get much better then that right? lol. Well keep writing, I'll be looking for it.

Whoa! I never thought about Tenchi and Kiyone hooking up! It's so innovating; it's chaos waiting to happen! This is a great novel! Please keep on writting new chapters cuz I'll be readind them. :

Wonderful story. I really love how you've captured both Tenchi and Kyione's character and turn it into a wonderful relationship between them both. I also like how you've set your story up to go all the way till at least their engagement. I also envy how you can set up so many plot twists to throw the couple into humerous or serious situations to come between them, but you always let them find a way to come out on top, as they should. The only problem is its getting close to the one year since you've updated and thats not acceaptable for a story of this grade, its too good to be forgotten, and what of the clif hanger you left us at whats going to happen with Kiyone's parents and the supposed suitor that will arive with them. Even futher what will happen when Tenchi goes to college and just when will Kiyone use this charm women on her planet have to get Tenchi to propose to her, and how will he do it? There's too many questions left unanswered. PLEASE UPDATE!. Keep up the wonderful work, and i'll keep on reading.

All I have to say about these first two chapters is WONDERFUL. I can only find a few small typos and to be honest i'm so into this story that my mind fixes them on the fly and I don't even notice them hardly. Wonder work on the chemistry between Tenchi and Kiyone it takes a lot of work and I really like how you made Kiyone just as possessive if not more so of Tenchi as he is of her. I can't wait to read more but unfortunatly I need sleep. Keep up the great work and i'll keep on reading.

update soon i think ts great you gave Kiyone the spotlight she's a good character and doesn't get the popularity she deserves