Reviews for Icicles
Rare Ship Shipper chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Its actually pretty good. Though, I think we need to know what was going on in their heads. Just so it makes more since.
CritiqueFanfique chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
The start of the tale was interesting, taking in a OC and setting in a storybook style of narrating. It became a bit confusing without knowing what Icy and Toast looked like, but one could always imagine a snowflake and a tiny piece of toast. Though it was hard to feel for the new characters when we know very little about them. Leaving the sad moments to feel a bit hollow.

I cant say much for the romance between Icy and Wilt. Since nothing was really established why they grew close in the first place. Though i imagine the intent of this Fic was meant to leave a sad tone, being marked as "Angst". But i believe the story would have done better if there was some message behind it.

Other then that, i would suggest take what you have from this one-shot and making it into a larger story. So we can explore The little girl and her life with icy. I'm sure it would make a good chapter story. But as it is now, it feels more like a sad little tale, with nothing to take away from it.

GrungeGiRL chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
That's real sad! Oh, well, just as well I love sad stories. Keep it up - it rocks!
Lobo-Chan chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
Honestly, I don't know either. I WISH I could see the pilot episode but by some odd (Or not-so.) coinsedence, my mom always has plans when it's on.
Icy Toast chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
What is Icy? What is Toast? Did I miss an episode?
Japanesekitty chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
Rai-Mun chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Oh Gods...

I'm crying...

I can't belive I'm crying...

I love you, I love this fic, I love Icy, and I love Wilt...

Gods, I think I'll go cry some more...

Poor Wilt... TT_TT

-Rai H.G.
Sullen Kitten chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
Barry I. Grauman chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
No, no, NO, don't apologize! This story is TOO SPECIAL to fit into the other one. In fact, now

that I've read it, this is an excellent "prequel"

to the first one! You've established Toast, and Icy's relationship with Wilt...and now it's

perfectly clear WHY Toast acts the way she does-

er, isn't it? ;}
Miss Understood Genious chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
wow! i love such creative stories, the fresh, new, original ideas! yourse is no exception. you have a vary nice... two vary nice stories, that you should continue to write! please update soon! rock on, and keep writing.
Mr.M7 chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Very eleget. I think that everyone is therizing about Wilt's arm because it's a large event to lose a limb. But then again, some of the gratest heros die alone.
The Cheryl One chapter 1 . 9/18/2004 was okay. I generally dissaprove of fancharacters a great deal, but I guess the fairy-tale-esque style of writing here made up for it.
Crazy Good chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
O_O wow...

just freaky! not bad, just...creepy. it's the way you wrote it. it sounds like a child's fairytale book the way it bounces! even when dealing with death... CREEPY!