|Reviews for Mirage of the Past|
| UnLike Us chapter 1 . 10/29
Really well done. Almost like a diary, the relentless, desperate struggle. The despair of the old AVALANCHE members and constant struggle of human kind.
The fight with Mirage and Sephiroth was very well written. The gruelling battle really got through. The hope and astonishment when he went down, lost his sword and then was healed, followed by awareness that it is far from the end. The difficulty of the battle totally reached me as a reader. Excellent job!
| hey there chapter 1 . 5/27
Dude, honestly this was the best fanfiction I have ever read. And I'm not joking. I have read many ffvii fanfictions and this is the best. I could literally imagine it happening. And the way you are writhing is also amazing. Although it was kinda confusing, the Wings thing and the colors, I love how it ended up and the mystery to who are the Wings throughout the story. It's also really smart we only know Cloud and Sephiroth out of all the colors. ( And the part with the Turks, really nice.)
| Angry Penguins chapter 1 . 5/4
This was an amazing story!
| Lehna chapter 1 . 3/29
Reading this story gave me goosebumps. You took the world of Final Fantasy and twisted it in such a way it became captivating. The Wings are often confusing, Cloud and Sephiroth are sometimes creepy, and other times fascinating, this story isn't always clear but she's always full of emotions.
Your story definitely one of my favourites. Well done!
| CryptCreeperX chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
:3 This will always be hailed as my favorite story. Like ever. Even after all these years of reading and faving and following, this was THAT STORY I had at the back of my mind. I remember reading it the first time and going... 'holy heck, this is epic and beautiful - I want to aspire to this type of writing'. It's hard seeing a story rich with original concepts and an original character, taking the FF7 lore into a whole different level. It's been I think 4 years since I read this? And still, the concept of it still haunts to this day. It's freaky and gorgeous at the same time. The fact my favorite pairing is featured here is just icing on the cake. But as I recall, this was one of the very first stories to highlighted the potential of them. It still makes a big impact on me, even when I wasn't into the yaoi concept just yet. I still found their portrayal to be sensual and stunning. This was THAT STORY that opened my eyes. So you can imagine that how I tried to track it down because stupid me forgot to fave it. I had to ask the forums for help since I kept missing it during my search. Now, I'm glad this beautiful gem sits in a proper place in my faves list. And now, outta the blue, I come today to realize I hadn't left a comment on it. I'm rectifying that now.
Thank you, special writer, for making this story. Thank you for leaving your mark and inspiring writers like me to go forth and explore this wonderful world with a fresh and exciting concept. :)
| Linael-Aeonsky chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
| GoldenDragon326 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Damn. Confusing, but a hell of a story. Very nice.
Vincent - Red - Tencin / Tifa - Purple - Afi / Yuffie - Olive - Fiyue / Aeris - Pink - Sira / Cid - Yellow - Di / Cait - White - Tai / Barret - Brown - Terra / Nanaki - Rust - Ikana (the narrator) /
Sephiroth - Green / Cloud - Blue
| Mo0Chroi chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Okay - I have to adore this. Its very fascinating - how its worded in an apocalyptic sense; how no one knows anyone's name but address them as colors or titles. I can only guess who a few are - and then they're implied to be the bad guys...
I think Red / Gunner is Vincent - Yellow / Pilot is Cid - Pink is Aerith - Yuffie is the Ninja - and Blue is Cloud? R is Reno since he implied Rude in some of his 'letters'.
So as confusing as HELL as the Wings are - the mere words between Sephiroth and Cloud - so few with so little action tells a story of how much they love one another and its really fascinating XD I can't guess who the rest of the colors are but I feel like it'd take away from the story XD
It was nice to see that Sephiroth won - it really is and how he has Cloud forever. God I love eternal love stories XDD Ah - I'll stop gushing now! :3 Great job - this is amazing and well done, the ending is vague but I think its vague in a great way.
| Karano chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Wow...Seph won? HE DID? AWESOMED I love stories where he wins(I hate Cloud, Btw). You expressed this so nice. It was truly a prefect masterpiece. I loved it so much I didn't even observe the spelling mistakes, if there were any. Cloud's the key to victory and Seph masters him. I don't fave just any story. I followed thousands of stories and yet only barely a few made it to my favourites. Now their number raised by one. Congrats for making into my top -cheers-. And if you know stories where Seph wins, please share your knowledge with me via pm. Anyway I liked this so much! My fav one shot definitively.
| Flayne chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
This fic gave me goosebumps. It certainly does an interesting spin on the topic of eternal love between our favorite heros. Too bad humanity kind of extinguishes because of it...or not, since we are like rats. Thanks for writing this eerily realistic fic. I enjoyed it.
| Crystalstorm chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Twisted in some ways but a good read. I liked this alot. Ja.
| The Invisible Fan chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
| Fireotaku18 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Oh My god that was really really good!
| Ashley Antwolf chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Actually, I don't care if I'm the 50th or not... but since you thanked me for simply favoriting this story, I've always wanted to ask you something: Can you please please please tell me who is who? About the Wings, I mean. I'm hopelessly confused... -.-a
P.S Great story, by the way ;D
| Keedra2173 chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
This story is awesome. I really enjoyed reading it. I wish you would do a sequel or a prequel. I would really like to know how Avalanch was betrayed and what happened to the survivor.
I really like how you only say Seph's and Cloud's names. It was fun to figure out what colors went with each party member.
I really hope you continue writing.