|Reviews for Oblivious|
| SuperNeonCarrot chapter 8 . 10/6/2004
Another great chapter. I agree with you, I really do enjoy Kane's character. But then again the vilians are some of my favorite characters in most stories
| BlackHorntailJunior chapter 7 . 10/4/2004
Ahem... You're not planing on killing Remus off, are you? That cliffhanger was not good. I mean it was superb, it's just I'm gonna somehow have to keep my nerves under control until Wednesday. Fat chance.
Anyway, the action was so good. And your descriptions are excellent. I could picture the cold so well.
And I have tons of questions about what's going on, but I guess I'll have to wait. Just don't kill Lupin, please.
| Howling Wolf 22 chapter 7 . 10/3/2004
Oh no...this is not good, this is not good, this is definitely not good *pacing back and forth in worry*. OH, I hope Remus is going to be ok. CURSE YOU, KANE!...poor Remy
| trevor-bruttenholm chapter 7 . 10/3/2004
That was so.. so.. BRILLIANT! You write your action sequences in the same wonderful way that you write your dialogues. The tension was incredible.
And boy, I know I shouldn't, but I like Kane a lot. He is just such a compelling character. If he was the one that bit Lupin, did he have a reason for converting him and not killing him? What happened? Your plot is just too good.
Oh, and BTW, that cliffhanger! Thanks heavens you update on such regular basis. I'd be bouncing off the walls if not.
And you better make Lupin OK :) Poor guy.
| TrinityDD chapter 7 . 10/3/2004
That so amazing! Kane is just so scary. AndI hope Remus is fine. The poor thing, sniff!
| asdf chapter 7 . 10/3/2004
Argh! That's so not cool! You have to update soon. Must. Good fic, by the way. I like the feral and agree with you about FWP. I also like what you did with werewolves being affected by Unforgivables.
| SuperNeonCarrot chapter 7 . 10/2/2004
You're a very talented author, and one of my favorites at the moment. Keep up the excellent work.
| abesapien chapter 7 . 10/2/2004
You might be running out of ways to thank people, but I'm running out of praises. This chapter was so awesome!
The action was great! And Kane is really cool (I know he's the bad guy, but he's cool anyway). Was he the one that bit Lupin? Why? What happened? Grr.. with every chapter you post I just want to know more.
Really good stuff.
Hmm. One question though, you're not going to kill Lupin, right? He is going to get better, isn't he? Please make him OK.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Ija Ijevna chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
It's the kind of fanfiction I really admire - which develops characters and book's threads even deeper than the original; this kind of fanfiction that can be considered missing chapters of the book. I've come across Your story just recently and it's truly refreshing after many other ones - it has plot, it has sense, it has style and action. Not mentioning complex and realistic portraying of Lupin. It may sound obvious, but considering typical fanfiction, it is not. ;) What was the most brilliant? Primo: The Remus - Severus' dynamic, where You showed this contrast between rather childish Snape's sarcasm and Remus' much more subtle ways. Secundo: Explanation of werewolves' nature by Lupin - I like thorough lectures very much ;) and just this kind of intelligent angst as well. Tertio: "The Howling" - it's beatifully Pratchettian - that "wild" music, these yellow contacts, and gentle, sceptic Lupin in the middle of this all. It's capital!
/By the way - forgive me my English; it's not my first language. I manage much better in reading than in writing./
| MiniMiPink chapter 7 . 10/2/2004
OMG! He is going to be OK. Right?
Can't wait till Wednesday!
| GYRC chapter 7 . 10/2/2004
Wow! That was AMAZING! I loved that chapter so much! You must've put a lot of hard work and time into it!
I can't wait for the next one!
| BlackHorntailJunior chapter 6 . 10/1/2004
Well, girl, you have an amazing subconscious! Please, do use it :)
This was a wonderful chapter, I was hanging on every explanation Lupin gave. You handled the exposition in a great way, I actually didn't wan't the bell to ring, I wanted to know more :)
I felt bad for Lupin, though. He really seemed so exposed; I felt like giving him a big hug :)
Oh, yeah, and about your replies, don't kill yourself about them. I'm happy whenever you update. Really, general thanks are fine with me.
| trevor-bruttenholm chapter 6 . 9/30/2004
The line came from a dream? Well, please keep on dreaming, especially if you can dream about lines like that :)
It's great how you make Remus so in canon and you manage to add little stuff of your own. I almost thought I was reading one of the books. You really got Lupin's character. And I love all your ideas concerning werewolves. The feral is excellent.
And well, poor Lupin having to expose himself so much. He truly is a Gryffindor. I'd probably be running away if I had to face a class to talk about something so personal :)
| TrinityDD chapter 6 . 9/30/2004
Well, that was a lesson! Probably if I had been in has class I wouldn't have payed any attention to what he was saying, though. Remus is so cute I'd be just drooling :) Since I was not in his class, I did pay attention. And I think it was great. Loved the explanation for the feral. I really want to know what happened to Remus, and what happened when he was bitten. And thanks for updating so soon.
| Howling Wolf 22 chapter 6 . 9/30/2004
:D And I appreciate it greatly.
Poor Remus, having to talk about something so personal...especially when it got into the feral business. :( But even if the topic wasn't all that nice...it was a really good chapter.
You know what to do from here. (Update soon, which is what you have been doing:))