Reviews for Arise From the Fire |
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![]() ![]() I agree with HayNet, this story is SO good! It's been a long time, and I mean a long long time since you updated! But this story ROCKS, it would be awesome if you got back on it and added more to the story, I'm dying to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() For the love of God! Add more to this story, it's too good to just leave hanging! |
![]() ![]() o...so arien knows, eh? marina seems a bit out of character. she's crying more than she used to, and she seems more feminine. i dunno. good chapter! |
![]() ![]() battle next chapter! yay! boromir and marina dueled. and boromir won, but just barely. *sigh* i kinda wanted marina to win, but your way is better, seeing how boromir got some truth out of her. and he kissed her. happiness. next chapter! |
![]() ![]() marina's wearing a dress? lol. so, marina and boromir are back together, if you call what they were before as being "together". next chapter! p.s. nice ending, by the way |
![]() ![]() the plot thickens! will boromir actually marry lady arien? ha! he just admitted marina is beautiful. next chapter! |
![]() ![]() alright, here i go again, comenting on the BEAUTIFIUL names you come up with: Lothiriel, Amrothos, Elphir, and Erchirion. i'm naming my daughter Lothiriel! I also want a pet silver wolf named Naz. next chapter! |
![]() ![]() this made me laugh - "...except in this case, i believe it has failed me. because i'm stranded in enemy lands with no food, no water, and...er-you" "thank you very much," he said sarcastically. no, how did they from that, to this: "Marina could taste the rain on his lips as he kissed her." these two... no! and now she's gone! arrg! next chapter! |
![]() ![]() you like writing about dreams, don't you? so, boromir and marina are alone together in the middle of nowhere. maybe this will pull them together. next chapter! |
![]() ![]() Orcs! yay! even though Orcs are nasty creatures, they make me laugh. weird, i know. ha! marina saved boromir in the most stylish fashion: stabbing the Orc in the stomach and then slashing off his head. wonderfully done. i love marina and boromir's verbal sparing. too funny... next chapter! |
![]() ![]() soo, now marina is tied up. goodness, they are like meg and erik. haha. things ran smoothly in this chapter, so i don't have much to say. happy writing! off to the next chapter... |
![]() ![]() haha - "how bad could a woman be?" and i reply: "very bad." so, now boromir and marina have met. "if you do anything..." she said in a meaningful voice, "I sweam to the gods you'll pay." i can see love sparks already. even though they just met each other, they make me laugh. children... is this like meg and erik? hating each other at first but then growing to love each other? off to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() so, marina is now living at the black gate. the plot is already thikening! Razkan: another cool name. i want to name my children after some of these names you've come up with! lol. next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ahh...this is a boromir and marina pairing? *rubs chin pensively* intersting... how on earth did you come up with such AWESOME names? my favorite: Ereidain. these names sound like Tolkien chose them himself! on to the next chapter... |
![]() ![]() GREAT descriptions. YES! i LOVE stories where the main woman in the story is a FIGHTER! i love strong characters. but, there must also be a hint of softness, which marina seems to have. next chapter! |