|Reviews for When will I feel better?|
| martinannamartinanna chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
I loved your piece.
It reduced me to a sobbing mess
Well, when I say sobbing I mean I had a significant amount of tears flowing
| Morphox chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Aw! So sweet!
I absolutly adored it!
Thanks for a great one-shot!
| BlackHalliwell chapter 1 . 11/16/2006
| Serpent91 chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
love the story!
| Yu Yu Hakusho Lover chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Really good but the bold when they're conversing annoys me. In a normal book, it wouldn't be bold.
| Rhiane Raine chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Good idea on the plot line but your writing tone sounds a little bland. Not to be critical, but it didn't have any... passion? No, I suppose I mean to say that you don't go into enough detail, but merely state what is happening and being said. To me, reading your fanfic was a lot like reading something from Readers Digest that you can't interested in no matter how cool the topic. Sorry, this isn't a flame just a way to help you write better and to let you know how.
| Mrs. N. Snape chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Wow, I this is really great.
More i just can't say i don't know how i only can say that it is really great how you discribe those feelings.
I hope there is more to come?
Greetings Mrs. N. Snape
| illyria-light chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
That was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful.