Reviews for A Dark Pact
and then john was a zombie chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Eh, New Jersey is where hell is, although there's a smaller version under the DMV.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 7/19/2006
"imouto" is little sister, and "imouto-chan" is very common.

"nee" refers to older sister, more commonly "anee" or "onee-san", though "onee-chan" and "nee-chan" are not uncommon.
Talantus chapter 2 . 7/4/2006
wo OOC ! even tough i disagree on some thing in the fic, i still find it funny to read and since your the fics master: your fic, your world.

i won't go against anything you might writte. but for now its funny! can't wait for the next chapter ;).
GMan chapter 2 . 7/4/2006
The irony of Shinobu liking Ryouga, but hating Ranma is hilarious! Especially since one of Keitaro's best traits is his forgiving nature, whereas Ryouga couldn't let go of a grudge to save his life. In fact, if you ignore his over-confidence, Ranma is actually more similar to Keitaro than Ryouga.
Zeroeye chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
was this the grand plan to make a nice plot, semming terror, and then jump into it talking about Ranma1/2 ... never seen that before ... yup first time...

ney way all good

btw Ryoga is the best,is the best...
NoshMono chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
Wow... welcome back, I suppose? Anyway, with the supernatural theme you posted up there it almost seem as if Kanako is a vampire or something. Ayway, can't wait to see more!
tomdj1701 chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
nice chapter
Vensert chapter 2 . 7/3/2006
Wow, Shinonu is scary... but I like it!
tomdj1701 chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Well done Daimyo Shi, but PLEASE UPDATE THIS ONE.
Redwyrm chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
I am begging you plz contenu this story!
goku chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
tanto is more a short sword or long dagger than a knife also please update this sometime its good work
DMage chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
dude nice. i hope u update soon cause i want to see what happens to nare lol. _
darkstar chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
I can't seem to picture Shinobu doing this. Maybe she's angry at Naru for punching around Keitaro all of those times? Anyways, it is an interesting concept that Shinobu is plotting with Kanako, it should be very interesting indeed to see what happens next...
Hanku Royiaki chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
WHOA! Understandable! Can't wait to see what those two do next.

UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!

Hanku
Eden's pseudonym chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Good start. I'm looking forward to seeing how this goes.

Isn't Imouto-chan, little sister though? And Onee-chan/-nee-chan older sister?

Any idea how long, you are planning to make this?

-Eden
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