Reviews for Lullaby
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3
Sorry I don't get it
AnamGrey chapter 1 . 8/24/2014
Such emotions, such feelings! You take the reader to another world, you make us travel through the waves of so many emotions. You know exactly when to change direction and exactly when to switch from pain to comfort to joy to pain again and then love. You have a talent. NEVER stop writing!
SplendentGoddess chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Oh wow... Not what I was expecting from the summary. Actually, from the summary I had no idea *what* to expect. I was pleasantly surprised! In a totally heartbreaking kind of awesome way, of course. Quite the tear jerker, but it was beautiful, and a *very* unique concept. I've definitely never seen the video diary left behind kind of idea done before. Hell I don't even think I've seen the cancer idea done before. Most people just have Kagome's father die in a car accident or something, assuming they bother mentioning it at all. He's not usually the central focal point of a story. Knowing you'd tagged it Inu/Kag I had kind of suspected it was going to turn out Inuyasha was behind her watching most of the video as well, so I wasn't surprised when he showed up. More relieved, actually, since that's what I'd been hoping was going to happen, rather than her just going back to the past and having a different outlook on life he didn't share or understand. That was such a tender WAFFy moment at the end there! Beautifully, beautifully done.
kagome007 chapter 1 . 3/23/2014
Dis was soo soul tching
my dad is still wd me n yet...i had tears flowing dwn my face...
I ws realllyy tched...
Vry few written material has had d ability 2 mk me feel sad enuff 2 cry...
N ds ws one in a long long tym...
hatesnicknames chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Holy hell. That was amazing. Thank you for writing it! I was literally sobbing. So good!
Take Me To My Fragile Dreams chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
That was so sad. I mean, I'm crying right now and... Wow. That was just... amazingly and beautifully written. You are an amazing writer and I can't praise you enough on how amazing this story is. Thank you for sharing such an amazing and emotional piece.

:)

-TMTMFD
KAYE chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Ahuhuhu...I cried reading your work. it was so beautifully done. nothing to criticize here. its perfect! with all the right tempo of emotions. sigh...i think i may need another box of tissue.
skye668 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I was just going through stories when I stumbled onto this one. I've lost many family members and a best friend to cancer and I'm only 19. This story was so powerful and touching. I couldn't help but cry. This was brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. You captured the essence of pain and love. I'm truly touched by your story and it helped become more thankful for who I have in my life. Thank you so much for writing this and making a difference in my life. You are truly a remarkable writer.

Thank you,

Rachel
Rayve chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
Amazing! It made me cry... My dad isn't dead or sick or anything like that... but I feel like he is sometimes, that's how far away we are. I wish my father was like that, but he's alive and well, and that's great. I think I'm going to go talk to him now...
Crazy With Happiness chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
this story was amazing. thanks for bringing me to tears and bringing out a smile towards the end. great writing
Lionsheart13771 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I know this was written a long time ago, but i stumbled across it today, and i don't think it was by accident.

You helped me so much with this. Thank you.

It was really beautiful.

Lions Heart
elf mermaid chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
*sniffle* I loved reading this; while I thankfully don't have a parent die, my grandmother did die recently, and all I have of her memory-wise are letters she sent me and how her laugh sounded. Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope that you did not go through having a parent die!
chahiro in love 101 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
amazing
channyfaith chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Such a sad yet fluffy piece, I really enjoyed it!
hanmajoerin chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
this story brought me to tears. Billy Joel is amazing and this was one of the first songs that got me to like his music. The story was beautifully written! The way you described her father is almost excatclly how I pictured him. Well done I loved it
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