|Reviews for Lullaby|
| kakite chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
*wipes tears off keyboard so I don't get electrocuted*
That was exquisitely wonderful. Now there's tear stains on all the things on my desk. I have no criticism except, keep writing.
| jschu25 chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
You did a wonderful job on this story. You had me crying at work because it was so sad, so sweet, so heart breaking and so full of fluff at the end. I have to agree that LR rocks and she is nice too. Bravo, jschu25
| Iokia-Genji chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
I just wanted to compliment you on an absolutely beautiful story. The emotions in it seemed so real, I could FEEL them. I almost cried at the end! Thank you. It was beautiful. absolutely beautiful.
| BatmanSwiss chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Wow...that was very well written! I know a little of the pain of losing a parent, though a different scenario, and this must have been very hard for you to write. This is definately a wonderful creation, and most definately not too fluffy! Though it seems just a little ooc for them, I think that if the situation were presented like this that they might act similar. In other words...I think that you did an excellent job with a difficult subject! Keep up the great work!
| Aurora Nyte chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
This was so beautifully written.. it brought tears to my eyes and that is something that rarely if ever happens.
It brings memories of my own and strangely it seems to help with the sadness of my heart.
Thank you for expressing something as this in such a wonderful light and I do so hope that you will continue writing other stories.
| Kitz the Kitsune chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
OMG! I cried!
I luved it!
So write another one.
| Valdimarian chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
I LOVED IT! This is better then 99% of all the FFs I've read, and I've read a number of good ones! I think you're right in putting this as a one shot, because I dont think anyone could top this chapter, even if they had a month with no other obligations (fat chance) Be sure to give puck a cookie for this story, or a whole box of them!
If you check your em_n_lilac account, you'll be wondering why I'm able to review, it's because I'm on another computer at the moment, and it's taken me a while to get it on , but I had to push it forewards for this story!
| funkyduck chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
I LOVE it!
| Orion Hime chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
Oh my, this is the BEST story I've ever read! I LOVED it! It's absolutely beautiful! I wish I could see this animated or drawn out in manga form! Absolutely gorgeous! This will be one of the stories I read over and over and over! Your writing is beautiful, and this is one of the few stories that I couldnt tell how things were going to play out. Inuyasha and Kagome weren't OOC either, which made the story all more enjoyable. Thank you for making my night (and probably my week) with this wonderful piece of writing!