Reviews for Retribution
tomorrow4eva chapter 1 . 6/7/2016
So, the dark hair throws me. Did Inuyasha get absorbed but win control of Naraku's body? I'm a bit lost.
mathkid chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Sorry... still not getting it. Was it that Inuyasha won against Naraku and came back for Kagome, who had already assumed that Inuyasha would lose and she would be facing Naraku? Only then it actually -was- Inuyasha? But what was with the dark purring voice?
YueYing chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Oh...! You've really caught my attention, mostly because I'm so completely lost as to what's going on!

It seems like Naraku tried to absorb Inuyasha but Inuyasha fought him and instead took over his body? That's just my guess...but looking at the Sango and Miroku part, I'm not sure I'm making any sense.

If it's not too much trouble, I wonder if you could email me an explanation?

Snickerer chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
Bwahahaha! YES!

This is, as far as I know, a totally original concept. PLEASE reconsider the oneshot status!

- this just begs for more...
Ryoko Metallium chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
You've have my attention, madam! Seriously, this looks to be very promising. I'm interested to see if you plan on continuing with this. Is there going to be more? Please, update soon!
InuLvr4eva chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
So did like Inu Yasha die... then Naraku make himself look like Inu Yasha so she would hesitate to fire an arrow? DId Inu Yash acome back alive or... is that Kouga at the end or what? 0.o
drake220 chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
ok, i'm gonna tip the review scales and make it 3 who don't get it and 2 who do. i have no idea what just happened but i am curious! so if you could email me nad let me know, that'd be really cool
kirayasha aka kira chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Sorry but the ending not only didn't make sense to me, it also left me hanging...I feel like there should be more to it but there isn't. Maybe you should have tried to rework the ending to make it clearer before posting, especially if one of your betas didn't get it as that should tell you something. Perhaps had it been clearer I might not have felt as though I was left hanging. luv kira
Melissa Norvell chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
This was short, sweet and a good fic. Thanks for sharing it with me.
szmadad chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Ok, I feel really kinda silly...but I don't think I get the ending. Is that really Inuyasha? Or is he dead and that's Naraku taking his form?
AleGnA chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
That was great! I got it! Good stuff!