Reviews for You Can't Escape
Zuvios Gemini chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Even though it was really short, Gravitation is still one of my favorite yaoi anime. :) You personified Shuichi beautifully. Nice work. :)
Ob53zt chapter 1 . 6/30/2005

hey Heather!


i found your FFN account...

[hehe...i know..i'm psychic..XD]

and if i forgot to say..

tis Tangertine...

or Tangie..

or whatever you'd like to call me these days...



i love the poem, Heather!


i think it's very Shuichi..

and the format makes it flow really well and seem energetic and upbeat..

kinda like Shuichi...


now that i've finally read some of your writing...

you're a great writer!

[as if you didn't know that was coming...XP]

and no..

it doesn't scare me that you're empathetic with them..

you're still my best friend, no matter what...


well, loved the poem, darling..

keep up the great work!
yo wuz up chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
Wow I luve your fic It was well done and no grammer mistake (unlike myn)
The Fellow Marauder chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I am in math right now and not paying attention. But you know very well you are more important to me than math! Even if my mother does not see it that way, I love you.

Not much of a review, huh? ; gomen!

I like this, Smitty. This is well-written and has a nice poetic format to it. It shows Shuu-chan's real feelings. He is so in love with Eiri and it is obvious that Eiri loves Shuu. WHY WON'T HE ADMIT IT!

Well, nicely done. Eek! Have to pay attention!



Prince Toki chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
You really do show a connection with the characters Shindo-sensai! That's why I love this poem! You can really feel how Shuichi is feeling! Well write more! *v sign*
yaoihime chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
This is good. It's almost like you're writing a new song for shuichi to sing to Eiri. It's good but try not to use bold writing so much in your fics ok. Otherwise, great job on the format and try to write more Gravitaion fics.

Keep up the good work sis!

clari chan chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
I really liked this...when i get the chance i will go check out your Fake fanfics since Fake is another of my favorite mangas...You should continue writing gravi fics...your good at it :D
Ildreen Love chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
I liked the format. And it was a very good fic, you captured the way Shu feels very well.

I just wonder if you have to put everything in bold, because I'm not very fond of it...

Anyway. Keep on writing!

Ja ne!
Exile-the-Magnificent chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
This is WONDERFUL! I'm a huge fan of Gravitation so I really enjoyed this! Thumbs up totally!
Chrissy430 chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
This is good! I liked it a lot! It seems like some stuff that Shuichi would want to say to Yuki too. I liked your format!
Profiterole chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
This is so romantic and poetic! I think that's what Shuichi feels, even if Yuki sometimes rejects him. But we all know he does that in order to protect Shuichi.

I like the format too. It's relevant, since Shuichi writes lyrics.