|Reviews for Scion|
| ArmoredSoul chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Hmm, the sharp transition from collected to breakdown was more than a little illogical, but the placement and ending provides the reasoning.
Still seems kind of choppy to me.
| Flyby Stardancer chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
I really enjoyed this. It's awesome, though I would have liked to see something to distiguish between scenes. The sudden jumps confused me at first. And while this does stand well on its own, a sequal might be nice as well. ;) Maybe play off of that last dialog between Op and RT.