|Reviews for The still of the night|
| The Moonmoth chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
the man he loved so much he had tried to break him. The paradox of that stabbed at his heart as it had for months
He frowned, but the darkness kept from revealing that. A tactical advantage. Considering the identity of his companion, that was somewhat ironic.
The voices were perfect except for this: "I think it is best that I leave." A bit overly formal. We Brits do use the odd apostrophe now and again - I would've gone with "it's". Just a little thing, but, ya know...
Thanks for posting this, it was a beautiful read :)
| biro1 chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
i ususally dont like slash - but this is very good, very much in character...