Reviews for Seriously Troubled
LoireLoa chapter 3 . 11/16/2004
that was good? i didn'y read the others though... i think i should have... :-D it was good though
Wiccan PussyKat chapter 3 . 11/14/2004
Aha, I've finally had a chance to read and review properly. Go me.

And I just realized I typed the word 'chance' as 'achnae', which is pretty apalling, even for me. I will change it immediately.

Right then...the long-awaited Pskovian...why is it that the Malfoys are often the best source of entertainment and merciless mockery? Good stuff. Especially the handlerchief-ettiquette thing. I was forced to tell my brother off for his disgraceful handkerchief-ettiquette earlier, and he thought it quite amusing too. But anyway.

I love seeing the four of them grown up, especially the boys...they're so similar to our dear Draco, even if he ISN'T the biological father.

I've never considered the importance of the order in which I and other people enter the room. Hmm. Something to think about.

Some of my favourite giggle-inducing bits:

"...Draco breathed a sigh of relief. At last, he got to play with his favourite son.

Play dress up that is.

In an entirely platonic way.

Not that he had a favourite, if Penny asked."


But not Sirius, because they were fairly closely related. Besides, he was pretty sure that his mentor, one Severus Snape, was already touching that kettle of well oiled Black with the proverbial bargepole.

Which was a thought that he never wished to have again.

The horror.


"When they were finally dressed, they had to present themselves to their father, who had been known, while faced by the improperly clad, to throw sour cream and shout “No, that’s dressing!
WiccanPussyKat chapter 3 . 11/7/2004
Ahh! I am so sorry! i had no idea you'd updated! Stupid author alerts were supposed to TELL me...grr. Anyway, I have to dash off soon but I promise I'll read and review next weekend.

*Blows out the candle*

Blessed Be,

LoireLoa chapter 2 . 10/4/2004
sheep? llama? what?
Wiccan PussyKat chapter 2 . 9/25/2004
*Laughs* You mentioned llamas! And pineapple farms! And pineapple farming llamas! Lol, that delighted me no end...wait, they actually USE llamas for farming pineapples? Oh, I knew that, of course, I wasn't just being random, not at all...

Anyway, nice to see Lupin has his little eccentricities. Pineapple-shaped eccentricities. Just as long as they aren't fish-shaped eccentries disguising salmon as sausage rolls, because that just should not be DONE, but anyway...

Damn those cunning double Ls. They get me every time. *Shakes head*

Loved the mean streets of Grimsby

A very nice, llama-ish answer to Lupin's absence. Bravo.

*Blows out the candle*

Blessed Be,

Wiccan PussyKat chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
Lol! Brilliant start to what we can assume will be as brilliant a fic as the last, which is certainly saying something.

Ah, Malfoy...I suppose it's true what they say; being rich isn't everything. Of course, only poor people seem to say that, but that's besides the point. I've always thought it must be rather boring to have free reign like that, and apparently Draco agrees with me, which is a bit of a disturbing thought, but, er, anyway. "...And so there was no point in ordering dancing girls and grape-based beverages when all he got was fully clothed, classically-trained ballet dancers and schloer." Lol. He's led a sheltered life, being so rich...honestly, porn and alcohol? My brothers were doing that years ago, much to my disgust.

Dark rituals...tyings don't think I'll ask more about Lucius and Narcissa's private life. I'm young and impressionable, afterall.

Ahh, the frenchman it. I didn't even know a frenchman WAS a cocktail, but then, I haven't been brought up in quite the same environment as our dear Draco. It does sound intriguing, though. I'm now desperate to try one, just so I can say I had my mouth on a frenchman...I won't ask about the lemon bit either, it sounds quite innuendo-ey, but I'm not quite sure why...

Anyway, next chapter awaits, though given that it's 12:02 am and I have to be up at 8 tomorrow I'd better leave it till then. Bye for now.

*Blows out the candle*

Blessed Be,

Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
Ok, well, it was strange. VERY well written, though. I don't think I liked the whole gay and drunk thing, but it was interesting. And I laughed at the POTC quote. That was good. Good descriptions and stuff. Thumbs up.
LoireLoa chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
ok...that was interesting