Reviews for Keitaro Goes Psycho!
dufus2000 chapter 8 . 12/7/2016
good story. although I did not care so much for the negativity towards what he was doing. drawing boundaries and teaching the girls limits is what he should have been doing from the start. notes and plans isn't a bad thing. her reading it should be a privacy invasion. kind of broke the sense of the story. your story though, so have fun.
Quis Custodiet chapter 15 . 12/23/2015
This was a pretty good story except for the heel turn that Kitsune did in the middle. It was dramatically out of tone for both the character as well as the story you wrote. Even then, it was entirely implausible the way that everyone handled it.

That being said, the good points of the story was the imagining of what would happen if Keitaro just changed the way he handled people a little bit and the way that you established cause and effect to this end.

I also liked the way that the Naru/Keitaro subplot was resolved (even if it was a bit abrupt I think) because it was nice to see Keitaro finally use his head this way and even for Naru to acknowledge her own short comings (it's always good when people realize their own limitations). I think however this could have been better all around if the relationship drama between the rest of the girls had played out a bit more. For instance, instead of having Kitsune become a heel, have her and Motoko start competing for Keitaro's time and affection and have that feed into Naru's complex.

Oh well, the story is old and you probably don't care too much about this feedback but I think that's how it could have been improved from a plot standpoint.

Anyway, I liked it and thanks for the read.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/18/2014
And Kitsune just gets away scot free with sending Keitaro to the hospital? After physically assaulting him with a baseball bat, and it's justified because "he'll bounce back in no time"?
That's ridiculous. I thought the story was pretty good up until that point. Her abusive actions should have some consequence to them, and the fact that there wasn't really ruined this otherwise well written plot.
swartzvald chapter 6 . 7/5/2014
Everybody forgets about Mutsume, ...
Guest chapter 15 . 1/24/2013
Great history. To bad there os so few love hina fic like this one and complete.
ChaosRune chapter 15 . 2/27/2012
Why the hell isn't Kitsune in jail? Attempted murder is no joke, no matter the reason, I would have expected at least for her to het the hell out of the Hina
ChaosRune chapter 8 . 2/27/2012
And just like that, this fic went down the drain
Sir Knight Silvayne chapter 15 . 12/20/2011
I enjoyed reading this. Granted I have read other stories in which Keitaro is not up to par with his anime or manga version, none the less, it was entertaining to read a story in which he is changing with time not in an instant like most I have read. Kind of a twist at the end but I still liked it. Kei/Mot are my favorite pairing.
Fayari chapter 15 . 12/8/2010
Well, don't I feel stupid for that last review. Although, come to think of it, the manga was a lot more realistic and satisfying than the anime. Naru did in fact come to terms with her feelings and had admitted it in the manga earlier than the anime had even hinted that she was starting to realize them. Apparently early enough that it did not come to this conclusion.

The manga did not delve to deep in the abuse aspect of their relationship, because in reality and in Love Hina canon, sadly, 'Abuse Is Okay When It's Female On Male'.

This went from a mildly interesting story to a slightly more interesting story in one chapter. Good that you took the less taken road by not having Keitaro and Naru end up together.
Fayari chapter 14 . 12/8/2010
And in the end, Keitaro comes out the worst for wear again. Sometimes I wish authors didn't get this detail right all the time.

I would complement you for keeping changes in the characters along the lines of Willing Suspension of Disbelief (in other word, not too OOC). But that's not exactly difficult to do, seeing as the characters themselves, as well as their motivations are much more complex than could possibly have been elaborated in canon. In these circumstances, many changes become perfectly believable.
Samhan chapter 14 . 7/29/2010
please continue
i love shonobu chapter 15 . 12/14/2009
This is a great story. How much do you know about psychology? This seemed pretty accurate...
Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout chapter 12 . 11/8/2009
Its incredible how the autor of this fic deals with a murder attempt, the poor guy almost gets beat to death with a baseball bat and nothing happens, not even a call to the police, one would expect the girls to freak out but then again this is not real life.
Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout chapter 8 . 11/7/2009
Wow Im surprise keitaro didn't got mad at what that kitsune did, guess he is really the same old good natured guy.
Higashiyama Sayuri's Devout chapter 7 . 11/7/2009
"Numb" ja ja ja I love that song.
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