Reviews for Scars of a War Torn Ravaged Land
LadyPhantomess chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
good job lil sis! that was excellent! you should write more of these poems!
Ja Reedus chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
This beautiful peice of literature was very touching. I love your poetry. This is probably the best poem I ever read. You have to write more poems.

Parvati
Syndromia chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Wow, no flames here. I'm still in shock, your story reaches into someone and moves them, shakes them, and never lets go.
MagentaLee chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
Your story, while extreordinarily beautiful, doesn't seem to connect in a way that I can understand. Would you be able to to add an author's note to explain it please? The emotions that come through your work are wonderful, but it makes it harder to appreciate when I don't understand what you're aiming at.
BatMunchkin chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
O_O wow. This is really good. REALLY good. I'm... speechless. Not even joking here. Speechless.
Dracona In Volata chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
I like this, it's awesome, and thought-provoking.