Absolutely wonderful!

Loved every aspect of it!

Loved the Janet/Jack relationship!

This was my favorite part...I feel like you captured the characters well...

"Doc..." Jack whispered and Janet pulled her head up to see what he wanted.

"What is it, Jack?"

"...Getting a little...personal...aren't you?"

If things weren't so serious, she would have laughed. "No more than usual, Jack." Even in pain, Jack O'Neill's main concern was always everyone else. His eyes were partially closed against the bright light, but a gleam of humor was clearly evident.

Oh man! That was great! Fantastic job! Thank you for sharing. Never enough Janet for my taste.

John Stone

Jack just can't get a break, can he? Or, well, actually I guess thismhe kind ofgot too many breaks, didn't he? Good story.

Very well written. One of the best of this sort of story.

Please write more. The story is great!

kawaii desu (it's cute)

i like it a lot

write more soon, ne?

Yes - it sounds as if Keith and 'ol Doc Fraiser might make for a nice pairing - what do you think? Ok - I'm off to read more...

Good story.

Great story, but then you write nothing but great stories . It was a good Jack h/c to enjoy in my lunch hour.