|Reviews for Kakashi & the Kunoichi from Thunder Country B3&4|
| ihavedeletedeverythingherebye chapter 2 . 5/17/2010
Um... Good story idea, but when you write, try to avoid using the word "he" at the begining of each sentance. It also might be a good idea to try to stop using block paragraphs, and I think that this story might be a little bit better if you tried writing from a first person perspective.(you don't have to, though. I've seen plenty of good fics that are written in third person.)
| MysteriousEyez chapter 4 . 10/9/2007
Wait I'm confused...might be just me but does he get his sharrigan back?
| Leslie chapter 7 . 4/9/2006
Hi, I am a new fan of your story's. I love it. Can't wait for the next book.
| een nihc chapter 7 . 10/20/2005
hn...i m a bit lost on tis vol of the it's b'cox i miss the book 2,i couldn't find it on ur story story got complicated n a bit carried to imagine rikako became the i'll continue to follow the story nonetheless: )
| Aveldon chapter 4 . 9/22/2005
Wow...a fiction thats finally written in GOOD ENGLISH! :D Anyways, this is some good stuff. And just wanted to add, i think Kakashi's stolen eye isn't posted yet
Keep up the good work!
| sangokirara5 chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
UPDATE soon! luv it!
| Piper Julian chapter 1 . 10/8/2004