|Reviews for Mystical Children|
| UniAniGi chapter 6 . 10/5/2004
Ooh, intriguing fic so far. I'm really fond of the family dynamic between Rogue, Kurt, and Mystique, and I'm sure it's about to get a whole lot more interesting with the introduction of Azazel. Haha... as if it isn't already complicated enough with Logan acting as a surrogate father to Rogue, and Remy as a... well... can't exactly say boyfriend yet. XD
I was pleasantly surprised when you revealed that not everyone at the Institute knew of Risty's true identity. I'm going to guess that you'll have Mystique continuing to use that persona to interact with her children. Heh... and Fury as school principal; he'll have that place turned into a bootcamp in no time. Yikes. XD
Whoo-hoo, yay for the canon-ness! I have no idea why most people think that it doesn't hurt at all whenever Wolverine pops his claws. You illustrated that wonderfully (not to mention very grusomely XP) with Rogue. Having them expelled was kinda weird though, a person'd think that she'd keep them, but ah well. Hrmm... and her killing that deer was both hella creepy, and wickedly cool. Haha... please pardon the atrocious slang. XD
*Gasp* And you acknowledge Dani's existence too! Everyone seems to forget about her since she was only in that one episode, or can't seem to understand the fact that a person can have more than one best friend. Although personally, I thought that she had returned home to live with her grandpa; after two years, I'd think that there'd be an awful lot of catching up to do. ~_
Hrmm... Kurt's growing wings, huh? I'd think he'd look awesome with black feathery wings, like a raven, bat wings just don't do it for me. P
Perhaps your title leads potential readers to assume that the fic has OCs. Mayhaps something along the lines of "Growing Up is Never Easy" would fit better, and it wouldn't hurt if you included some of the couples in the summary. Or maybe not... All I know is that the word "ROMY" seems to draw readers to fics like gnats to bug zappers. Of course, that isn't the case all the time, but it's still worth noting anyway. XD
I can't wait to see what happens next, so until next time, buh-bai! _
| Flame31 chapter 6 . 10/5/2004
Hey, great job. I have only one complaint. The claws are not part of Logan's powers. Some scientist guy graphed his skeleton with adamantium, but because of his healing power he was able to survive the process. That's all though, I can't wait for an update.
| ldypebsaby chapter 6 . 10/5/2004
Damn, what's going on with Rogue? Sounds like a lot of pain... Nice sence with Remy,
| Inverselina chapter 5 . 10/3/2004
Nice on chapter 5 I enjoyed it alot I am looking forward to see how you take the story.
| ldypebsaby chapter 5 . 10/2/2004
Great chapter, how is Kurt and Rouge doing... what's going to happen next?
| Kam chapter 5 . 10/2/2004
Wow Rogue with a kill on a deer nice!
| Zephyr Master of Chaos chapter 5 . 9/30/2004
Keep it up, yo. I like it very much.
| Natalia chapter 4 . 9/30/2004
I am curious to see if Rogue experiences anything like growing horns lol jk she might have some problems with other areas though.
| Kurt chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Kurt seems to be well writen so i aprove please update soon.
| Asharshartale chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Rogue ROCKS! she is so cool bossing people around I love that she has the others powers at her comand she should allways have that lol.
| alydhe chapter 4 . 9/30/2004
I really like this. I especially like the protective Kurt and sassy Rogue. Any chance of you continuing soon?
| z-man chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
Nice! I love Rogue she is the coolest but Kurt is cool too so gj with the character selection.
Are w gona actually get to see Mystique try to be nice to her kids for a change?
| Inverselina chapter 4 . 9/29/2004
Very interesting fic I like it so far. Just wondering is Rogue going to be experienceing anything straing like Kurt is?
Update soon please
| ldypebsaby chapter 3 . 9/29/2004
WHAT is in the world is Nick Fury doing as a principle? Are Kurt, Rouge and 'Risty' going to have family bonding?
| Zephyr Master of Chaos chapter 2 . 9/26/2004
Keep writing this please. I like it very much. It's so nice to see stories that aren't full of spelling errors and dropped punctuation. Especially when they are interesting to boot! Please update soon with many chapters!