Reviews for Justice League: The Spider
falciatore1669 chapter 2 . 7/22
peter should know what the justice league and batman are. in the ultimate universe the Dc comics exist as comics.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
spiderman could have been a great character but you fucked it up with mushy stuff. he isnt that mentally weak you fucking dumbass. why do authors tend to fuck up characters by making them seem vulnerable in the exact same way making it a cliche?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
you seriously just played the backstory card.. that in turn leaves guilt and feeling bad for spiderman. lol this is so fucking bad
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 5/24
Good job on the start
Angelic Black Wolf chapter 8 . 3/25
Please continue
EL WORMO chapter 1 . 1/5
Beleive it or not, but there is a crossover comic where Batman denies Spiderman the chance to be in the Justice League
MewLover9000 chapter 40 . 12/21/2016
I just finished re-reading this story, and I must say I enjoyed it once more, even more this time than the first to be honest. I loved how you had the air of mystery around Peter and how he wound up there. Then there's the character portrayals, which were most definitely spot on. I must also say that I actually like your version of Peter more than mainstream. The relationship with Kara and Peter; Dayuuum, this has to be one of the very few romantic pairs that make sense, I loved how "real" you made it seem. Then there's the battles, excellent storylines leading to them; Cyber-Spider (your OC) was one of my favorites, next to Ock. Overall 9.5/10, honest opinion; always room for improvement. :)
Tyler Lee chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Just a heads up I'm pretty sure someone is using big chunks of your story in their own.
Time Emperor chapter 15 . 6/25/2016
God... I'm not one to cry, but reading that got me into tears.
multyfangirl19 chapter 27 . 6/2/2016
hmm , maybe one day he'll help Cheeta return to human since he has a little experience from the Lizard?
multyfangirl19 chapter 25 . 6/2/2016
i remember either reading a Spiderman comic book or watching a cartoon where Spidey was facing the Lizard for the first time and he said my all time favourite of lines that he's said " hey! crawling on walls is my shtick , you start spinning webs and i'll sue." it was years ago i almost forgot it at one point , good thing i wrote it down at one point and found it again , it might have been from Spectacular spiderman
multyfangirl19 chapter 24 . 6/2/2016
well this will be interesting , i always wondered what it would be like to have the spider villain of DC universe to fight spiderman a hero of Marvel universe
multyfangirl19 chapter 23 . 6/2/2016
did you know that Spiderman was originally from the DC universe? Marvel and DC swapped a character a while back , Don't remember who DC got , i think he's a villain or something
multyfangirl19 chapter 17 . 6/1/2016
wow , that dream was a touch foreshadowing if not blown up a bit out of proportionate , so blind; stay that way for a few more months Pete that way you won't have to feel that much guilt about your last girlfriend when you start dating again
multyfangirl19 chapter 15 . 6/1/2016
ok that dream is a danger to yourself Pete , i would advise you to get John to make it so you don't remember after you wake up.
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