Reviews for Justice League: The Spider
The Warty Hogg chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
Writing and copying are NOT the same thing. I work as a professional writer and nothing will get you fired faster than stealing from other writers. And as long as you spend your time stealing, you won't be practicing and learning how to write yourself.
The WRITING is the important part. Not posting plagiarized stories for FFN reviews.
poseidon's gryffindor son chapter 10 . 4/11/2015
you got betty's name wrong for archie if you want archie jokes to be a possability the name is betty cooper
LoveGlutton chapter 15 . 4/1/2015
Peter Parker of Earth... LIVE
Korin Dragoon chapter 15 . 3/28/2015
Chapter 15: Letting Go. I cried along with him as he wrote those letters, I actually cried!, and I don't cry from stories or movies that often but that scene tugged at my heart strings.

I can honestly say this is the first time I've seen such emotion conveyed in a written story.

Great story bro.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
Joker: [wheeling a TV into Spider-Man's cell] Showtime, everybody! Live and in color - the end of the New Avengers!

Spider-Man: Don't make me laugh.

Joker: It's no joke. There's a surprise hidden in your little clubhouse.
[turns on the TV, showing the Watchtower]

Joker: And when your friends get there, kablooie!

[holds up a box]

Joker: Popcorn?

Spider-Man: Not from you, ya creepy clown with a creepy grin with creepy yellow eyes sittin' next to an albino gorilla called Ultra-Humanite!

Joker: Oh well, more for me, Spider-Man.

Ultra-Humanite: Joker, you and Spider-Man both nauseate me.

Spider-Man: Serves ya right, Albino Sasquatch.
Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
Yeah, I know, not logged in...
But at least I am reviewing and I will log in at the end if I fav the fic.
Give Hild my hello when you see her.
The bit where a hero loses everything and everyone is a rough start, but a valid one.
And the fic is complete so maybe the demons will go easy...
thealphamale chapter 20 . 1/29/2015
Great chapter! That was quick thinking by Peter.
thealphamale chapter 19 . 1/29/2015
Great chapter! But its Athena, not Althea.
thealphamale chapter 18 . 1/20/2015
Great chapter! Though Spiderman wouldn't be knocked out that easily.
thealphamale chapter 17 . 1/19/2015
Great chapter! Funny ending.
thealphamale chapter 16 . 1/8/2015
Great chapter! Peter's relationship with Kara seems to be progressing smoothly.
thealphamale chapter 15 . 1/8/2015
Great chapter! Two great dreams although I lik the first one best for obvious reasons.
thealphamale chapter 14 . 1/8/2015
Great chapter! Peter gets to choose between to of the hottest superheroens.
thealphamale chapter 13 . 1/8/2015
Great chapter! Looks like Peter has two women pining for him.
thealphamale chapter 12 . 1/7/2015
Great chapter! Like the twist at the end.
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