Reviews for Justice League: The Spider
Guest chapter 19 . 10/4/2022
Can we hope for Cheetah to be part of the harem?
Guest chapter 15 . 10/4/2022
I just realised. If Steward still with Hawkgirl, then is Vixen free?
Guest chapter 14 . 10/4/2022
So is Parker Luck gonna feeling in Peter a harem in the DCAU? So who’s the next lucky lady?
BlazeStryker chapter 7 . 8/21/2022
**Note sent to Joker in Arkham**

Cordial Reminder: A belfry can hold spiders, too.

Disrespectfully,
Doctor Fate

P.S. I am actually laughing.
BlazeStryker chapter 4 . 8/21/2022
If you go by the telekinetic strength/toughness explanation (post-Crisis), the reason big masses don't crumble a whole lot faster than they do for Superman is his putting a "grip" on the item/structure. Superboy's tactile TK is actually an *expansion* on Clark's talents. With more solar absorption and maturity, Connor would (if not screwed over by DC) eventually have all Clark's powers and outright telekinesis to boot. It's a shame Clark doesn't swallow his aversion to Lex and embrace the science of his own powers... he could carry anyone at full speed easily if he did.
FurryHecchi chapter 3 . 6/11/2022
plain emotions, just a few weeks and he got over with his lost? i mean, sure it was an ultimate spider-man, but still, the amazing spider-man lost his gwen and he spent how many weeks or months before he comes back to save the kid from intervening on rhino?
Mr.Heller chapter 13 . 4/13/2022
No one reads Author Notes because you constantly post Spoilers for the story, who would willing subject themselves to that?
Mr.Heller chapter 12 . 4/13/2022
Oh, goody, Otto is my favorite SM antagonist, Ultimate version is a bit... yeah, but it's still Otto, so that's nice. Just hope he won't do some lame BS like bringing the super formula, that shit was just so lazy.
bleacherspam1 chapter 1 . 1/27/2022
I'm not a huge fan of the rant or the mind pulling, felt very forced. Still interesting premise.
Jose19 chapter 10 . 4/5/2021
This story is very good too bad there aren’t versions of this for Young Justice and others.
Jose19 chapter 3 . 12/28/2020
The pairing with Kara is fantastic because she has the whole package being very attractive and powerful with a great personality.
Caliban03 chapter 40 . 9/22/2020
I really liked this crossover!
Thank you!
CODYARMY chapter 40 . 7/27/2020
Dam it sucide squad! Amanda you cunt I hope Spider-Man exposes you like a giant web. Scum bag govt
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2020
I love this story. Whoever wrote this was a genius. I loved that the writer had Spider-Man and Supergirl get together, I was not expecting that. Some parts of the story made me laugh. I also like that Doctor Octopus was added, in my opinion he will always be Spidey's
Arch Nemesis. Great job and I hope the writer makes a sequel to the story
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 6/22/2020
You know what, nvm about my last comment. I sat just looking at the first sentence for a minute and couldn't make myself read this. You got the introduction all wrong and I don't see how it could develop in a good direction from here.

If you ever decide to rewrite this then lose the moment where Peter lands in their base while they're talking about needing a new member. Too convenient and not as funny as I think you were going for. Even if it turns out somebody sent him there so it's reasonable why he appeared as he did... I don't care. Get rid of that scene. Then hold back on revealing spider man's past. Leave it something of a mystery for others, and with it kept close to his heart explore how his past is affecting him and the painful process of moving past it. That makes everything more compelling. A look at the reviews tells me you should've leveraged his intelligence in the story a lot more too, so there's that. My last advice would be to keep peter a bit distant from the team for the first couple arcs. Trauma is a long process to heal from and just shoving a bunch of nice people around him and telling them to be friends isn't going to fix it. So let him have his own time while they're around if he needs them. That's better than what I presume you did which is keeping him in the station for a long time or basically chaining him to be at at least one persons side at all times.
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