Reviews for Justice League: The Spider |
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StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 6/22/2020 I very nearly dropped this the moment he started narrating his past like it made sense to tell them. It didn't. I didn't believe it and it reeked of a forced info dump. 3-10 for the first chapter. It did enough to keep me reading, but almost made me quit it at the same time. |
SuperJoeyF721 chapter 17 . 6/20/2020 So the heroes plan to escape was to have Sue humiliate Doom by making his clothes invisible? I know there weren’t any options if that wasn’t it but I gotta be honest, that’s just lame. |
Kenrio chapter 5 . 4/15/2020 So again the curse will continue and Pete will be a photograph And here I though he will use his brain for the better of the society |
Tony McNucklz chapter 3 . 4/7/2020 the setup for this story feels forced. like peters past was just erased and he moved on without complaint. there just doesn't feel like a devestating emotional impact happened, instead it feel like you just wanted to skip to him integrating into the new world. because you rushed all of that, the story feels inauthentic and therefore doesn't hook my interest. |
Jose19 chapter 22 . 1/22/2020 Peter is not into Harems but it is a hard choice but Kara is the best for him. |
Jose19 chapter 4 . 1/18/2020 The story is worth its many reviewers but I want to see who Peter pairs up with. |
Firefly9202002 chapter 19 . 12/2/2019 I think you meant Athena there is no Goddess named Athlea. |
agmmagm chapter 12 . 11/11/2019 What kinda machine randomly transfer ppl around with this luck.. You need some magic in this cross over anndd i hope i dont see more marvel chars here it is a real bummer for dc spider |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/18/2019 For the love of god have him upgrade his suit he currently has the resources needed if he asked available to him and he’s a genius. Let him show it for Christ’s sake. |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/18/2019 Give peter some credit he’s literally a genius by far one of the smartest people in marvel universe which has several people that are vastly more intellectual then Batman. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Bro let’s not make it sound like anyone in the justice league would be actually horrified by a mutilated body, sure bothered or surprised but not horrified. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2019 Got to love temperamental hissy fits, |
I'm-Sirius1412 chapter 26 . 5/24/2019 just asking question really if he didn't want for his love one to get killed all he need to do is for him to be stronger than he is right now jeezz how far can he get to just be spiderman when all his allies can take on tanks except maybe some normal superheroes out their but man i still think he needs some upgrade haysss.. i know that this story is completed already but i can't help to rants some... |
Guest chapter 40 . 3/3/2019 Why didn't they send Oct. with the Lord's? |
Guest chapter 36 . 3/3/2019 How are superman and supergirl still alive there so weak |