this was a really awesome fic well done :)

love how this spidey isn't a high school punk gen z

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pretending this is the one who played in Homecoming lol

One of my fans pointed this story out to me earlier this month. I started reading it six days ago and just finished. It was not difficult to read at all like some stories. Yes there were some spelling and grammar issues. But once I got used to them it didn't bother me too much. The storyline was engaging. I have written my own Justice League Unlimited crossover (with Harry Potter) so know how difficult it is. Interestingly enough I also brought a Spider-Man character to that universe (Black Cat). The fact that you did it without access to the canon material other than summaries is impressive. I would have liked to see more development of the Kara & Peter relationship. But I'm pretty happy with the epilogue chapter progressing things. I'm also hopeful the sequel you mentioned will continue their relationship. One thing I'm hoping a sequel will address is their life span difference. There were glimpses of a Kryptonian under a yellow star living a very long time. They might possibly be immortal. It isn't really talked about a lot. That was one of the reasons I was a big fan of the Kal El/Wonder Woman pairing. Because nobody wants to outlive their lover by a wide margin.

If you choose to address it, I see several possibilities. You can have Spider-Man's own spider-abilities making him immortal (an easy tweak since you are the author and it isn't discussed a lot in canon). Or you can use Kryptonian technology to do it (something Clark can do for Lois too since she will have the same issue). Giving Peter partial Kryptonian genetics (enough that he gets the extended life-span/immortality) should be something that would be feasible for the technology Kal El has in the fortress. It could also have some interesting effects in enhancing his abilities. I really like what you did with showing Peter as a scientist. I would love to see more of that if possible in a sequel. Thank you for keeping the reality traveling technology around. I'm glad they didn't make the same mistake of destroying it again. That opens up endless possibilities for crossovers as well. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this story with the rest of us. I will definitely be recommending it to my readers.

man...Donna situation is so COMPLICATED

~Sigh~ Every man dream is also every man nightmare

so it was a dream. Thank god!

what the hell is going on? I thought this just T

oh shit! You just roast Tobey

I wonder if the League gets to test out fights against the villains and heroes of Peter's world in the training room.

i know this fic is old but i was just reminded of Ron Weasley and how the flash eats and how both Wally and Ron are both ginger hair men

i know the first time i read this i think i may have read a couple of chapter but i didn't realize it was going to be THIS good..i love all of the 'references' you've made in each chapter..it really feels like i'm reading both a Spider-Man comic and DC comic..it's been years but I was rather bore and was trying to figure out what other fic to read and thought i pick your story up again..glad i did pick it up again..it's getting very interesting to say the least

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Started readig this, and gotten to this chapter, the more i read the more it seem i think The parker luck is kicking in with the ladies. First Kara, now Donna, who next?