Reviews for Sins of the Heart
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14
Ok thats was a good Twist ;) over the whole Story i was sure Ron is the husband
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Dude... I actually was surprised that Kim was having an affair with Ron. I haven't been that surprised by the outcome of a story, much less a one shot, in a long while!
That fact alone makes me want to read more of your stories.
Good job, and keep on rock'n!
Ranchero D chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Furg nain fangul trichit meain. Dursen fubblert maizerg fuzznuttiest.

Snarg-krangle, Garf!

Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
you had me.
Muzzlehatch chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Why, you sly fox, you pulled an O'Henry on us! Nice story. Bad 'cess to Kim and Ron for their adulteries, though.
fatherfigure1 chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
Nice oneshot. I was fooled to the end. I could have sworn she married Ron and was chearng with Josh.

Keep writing,

Mr. Wizard chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
I kept going back and forth over whether the mystery man was Ron or Josh. Lovely rendering of a life gone down the wrong (?) road. Very good rendering of emotions as well.
Rye-bread chapter 1 . 6/23/2007
first read the story a couple yrs ago

was grabbed by the twist

still enjoy it

the only fly in the ointment

the kids

i've seen it close up

no matter how you gloss it, the kids get hurt

& that's a big tarnish on the reputations of kim & ron

still-good fic
Kipcha chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
*Jumps around happily*

I was getting mad throughout the entire fic, thinking her husband was Ron and the guy she met was Josh. Gr

Now, Yes, cheating is wrong, VERY WRONG, but Kim and Ron belong together. I do feel bad for the kids, though.
spectre666 chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
I could have sworn I reviewed this when I first read it, lo these many, many moons ago. You succeeded. At first I thought it was Ron she had married, but the hints began at the store. By the end I was expecting Ron and happily correct. Of course, this was written before season four and before the "we grew apart". Very well done, and glad I refound it.

cpneb chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
Wonderful! the art of misdirection is an almost-lost one, but you have it here.

Let's get your creative juices flowing, again, shall we?

mkusenagi2 chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
WOW!Talk about a stunner of a story! MAN! Gotta dig through the rest of these gems here.

CastaS chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
i didn't get it first, but aftrewards i got it, good job
Beast57 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
this was amazing great job! keep it up and keep on writing.


Fear the Beast

I am the Devils worst enemy GOOD BEAST 7!
Etherelemental chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
Okay. I'm not sure how I exactly feel about this. It was well done, I'm just not so sure about what I think about the whole thing with Kim having an affair. That's the part that bothers me. Although, I had kinda expected Kim to have bee already married to Ron at the beginning of the fic. Anyway, it was at least well done.
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