HAHAHA crying cause he wouldn't see his parents.

My Mom and dad got divorced and my dad married an insane bitch who killed him and herself and my mom married an abusive (To her) Husband and he was very verbal abusive to me and my brothers.

I's liked to tell you many people don't like bad words in nice stories. And the message you sent me...hard to read cause you never stop.

You know, typing is important. Use capitals and puncuation correctly, and more people will want to read.

i wrote back

umm...ok... is this going to be ongoing or not? and if not...why is it rated R?

Um i think its pretty good... iike the idea of an america with poor japanese replacing keitaro. but i dont quite get the ending... didnt seem to fit the story.

Later much,

hahahaha.. weakling... hehehehehe

This guy's pathetic! if its you... I'm sorry. *caugh*not*caugh*

aww darn...there is no keitaro...im sure this is probably gonna be a good fic...but i dont really read chracter replacement stories...hope u continue to write more stories though!

Not bad! Not bad! A few typos, but everything's going in the right direction.

UPDATE SOON DAMMIT!

Hanku