Reviews for Despair
SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 7/4/2016
Im literally torturing myself with this...
TMNTLover284 chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
omg amazing but I seriously crying right now like omg donnie don't go stay strong!amazing righting
Armina chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Thise story was great! but why did you finished it like that?!
sophia chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
Oh dude...why?! You killed donnie. Crying here...very good writting. You should continue, but I hate loosing donnie...that's just, I can't even find the words. Please write again but with a happier ending. Now excuse me while I go cry in a corner.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
great story!
Make a sequel out of this please?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
You have depressed me on a whole another level
RatchetLover chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
So Donnie died?
CoolGirl001 chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
D..Did d-don-donny d-died *cry*,Ok back to the point,this one-shot story have many things other don't have -shot but the story full of feels, like da feels was so much death was NOT common to be seen in one-shot 3.I never seen "car accident" in TMNT fic before and Last,I hardly see donny died in fanfic esspecailly one shot, all these thing make this fic great 10/10!,i'm so impress!
kessadawn12765 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Do you know how hard it is not to cry at this? I am reading this at school and it is killing me inside holding everything back. Great job, so did not see that coming. I can't even imagine his brother's despair when they wake up to find out their brother died during the night and they weren't with him.
Bellefard98 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
Usually, in a story where a turtle result with injuries of death, and the author write so many memories, normally they recover and all slowly comes to the normally, but in here, you show us hope, and you make us believe than perhaps surrounded by his family and friends and all that good memories, maybe he can make it, like in the other stories...
but then donnie dies...
And leave me say you, than that is what makes this a really wonderful fic, because this radiate originality and a real concept, a truly concept of life and death, one in what the characters ends thinking in what is the best for the person, and no what they want... a dead in life in pain, or for most hard that sounds, a beloved one dead. even if this didn't have a happy ending, this has the best ending...
and when you ponder in that things, then you know that this is a real deathfic...
I am amazed for this work than is just amazing and one of the best fics I read... bravo. plus, when I read the word "Walkman" it really makes me feel nostalgic...
oh.. and i'm sorry for my bad english
Modern Venom chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
You bastard... makin' me cry... Dammit, that was such an awesome fiction! Good job! You even made heart-of-stone me cry. I'm gonna draw a picture for this, and give you the link when it's done.
Hawkeye1991 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
OMG this is a really powerful and beautiful story, I know that alot of people say they cry but I just read this while in my college classroom and have been asked what the hell I'm balling my eyes out about lol. The connections with all four off the brothers was amazing and when Splinter spoke to Donatello and told him it's OK to let go, I was in pieces...GOD keep writing it's great stuff :D
madagascarmaster chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
Magpiebee chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
I cried so hard inside ;A; this was beautifully written. I was hoping so much for him to live, but the ending was awesome. Very very great.
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.
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