Reviews for Loosing a Twin
PoppyECM.6-13 chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
I miss my twin... could you tell me the translations for the elvish please?
Guest chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
Me: So perfect..

Legalos: My bow shall decide the perfectness of this story.

Me: If its high the world will explode!

Legalos: Oh, then we're screwed.
blindrain chapter 3 . 10/17/2010
'À urya cálë! Á rúcë mórë! Á mahta i qualmenna! Qualmë urquin!'

- what does that mean? I got half of what Elrohir says (Farewell my brother...) :P

And, ouch, that was sad. And surprising. Good job. :)
Agena K chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
This is great, but you give no translations so the texture of the piece is sorely missing.
Elvenprincess3019 chapter 3 . 6/14/2010
Great end to the story! I love when Elrohir Whispered 'Namárië toron nîn. Melinyel. Nai Anar caluva tielyanna. I will always be with you." Good elven by the way I understood it but you should put translations up for people who don't understand.

The one thing I wish you would have done was lengthen the chapters... Add more detail to them and make them longer...
Elvenprincess3019 chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Interesting what happened was a dream... Let's just see if the dream becomes reality... / LOL im suprised he could sleep before a battle...
Elvenprincess3019 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
That was great! There are not may authors out there that write Elladan/Elrohir fic's and thats kind of sad because I absolutely adore them )! Your descriptive text was awesome! Elrohir's final goodbye to his twin... The smile was so nice... Very touching! Looking forward to seeing more of your work...
Aranel Lissesul chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
wow! that is SO WONDERFUL! and sad! *evil side kicks in!* why did he have to DIE precious? Why! WHY! WHY! not fair! who dare hurt Elrohir precious? who? tear them apart we will! yes precious! tear them apart! rip out thier FILTHY little inerds! evil orcses! nasty! cruel! EVIL! *ahem* sorry, insane moment is over, ah...*rub back of neck,* any way, i REALLY liked your story! as you can tell up there! :) love your work!

Yours till the Evenstar wanes!

Aranel Lissesul.
Lady Luce chapter 3 . 3/7/2006
This was a really good story and had a clever twist I enjoyed reading it.
Tears of Eternal Darkness chapter 3 . 7/29/2005
that was so sad!

keep up the good work!


NinielB chapter 3 . 1/2/2005
You are evil! How could you do it? this is so not right, and yet I love it! Very good story. Please keep them comming!
Elenaiel chapter 3 . 12/10/2004
Morwen! No! What does the Elvish mean?

This is well written; I always feel for your characters. Was it really necessary to kill 'Ro, though? He's my favorite twin...*sad face*

Eleniel (from MC if you don't recognize me)
nautika chapter 3 . 9/27/2004
I just scanned your story to see if it was complete. I dont think I'll be flagging it though. I keep thinking I'll make time to learn Elvish (really), but until I do, I dont think your story is for me. :-)
Ellfine chapter 3 . 9/27/2004
How sad that Elrohir was the one who died! Not that it's good for either twin to die, but still... Could you please translate the Sindarin for those of us who are illiterate? I'd like to know what it all met and could only pick out a bit here and there.

Nicely written! Well done!
Ellfine chapter 2 . 9/27/2004
Glad it was just a dream, but it doesn't bode well...
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