Reviews for Cheeze alert
Cali aka Eternal Optimist chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
OMG this story totally rocks!
elitejace452 chapter 1 . 3/25/2008
I totally should have never clicked on this while I was in my school library, only the bad part, my MALE librarian came over and read the one I had highlighted when I was trying to show my best friend, the one... that shirt is very becoming on you, if i were on you, I'd be coming too, well, yeah, he thought it was hilarious, and the only other person to see it happened to be the boy I have crushed on for about a year, but hey, he asked me out, and in all his hotness, and I said to him, your father must have been a baker cuz' he gave you a nice set of buns, and you know what he said, there must be something wrong with my eyes, cuz' i can't take them off you, and kissed me, isn't he sweet, well, anyway, this story was the most productive one i have ever read, because look what came out of it! so, i love you to pieces, and can't wait for more stuff from you!
lizzzz chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
how GR8 WAZ THAT! omg, im going bak 2 learn them all! where did u get em all from? lol
Jewls13 chapter 1 . 1/10/2002
Hey, that was great. Where did you come up with all those lines. I knew like, half. Nice job.
Black Angel chapter 1 . 9/30/2001
where did you get so many pick up lines? great story by the way!
AWluvvbug chapter 1 . 9/3/2001
I love this story! I read somewhere a long time ago and I forgot where, so I was all sad that I lost some of teh funniest pickup lines I have ever heard. SO three cheers to you and the insainly cheezy pick-up lines! ~Amanda
manda chapter 1 . 8/27/2001
hilarious!
the barcode boo chapter 1 . 8/24/2001
read it all please-Logan would NOT do this-ha ha just playin' this was a really good story...lates
Blaney chapter 1 . 7/24/2001
funny i likes it
thedorkygirl chapter 1 . 7/9/2001
Heyyyyyy . . . I love this . . . ::giggles::
Max DeLuca chapter 1 . 7/9/2001
I definitely laughed. Hard. "Ok, that was distasteful." Ha ha... :) :) :)
J chapter 1 . 5/25/2001
oohh, thats it? theres no more? please continue with it. t/c
JessiKa chapter 1 . 5/20/2001
wahooooo! GAREAT STUFF! ME LOVED THAT STORY! WRITE MORE, PWEASE? :)
Cyborg chapter 1 . 5/20/2001
Funny stuff! But since when does the human body have 265 bones? )
lily not my real name chapter 1 . 5/18/2001
come on, please write more, your not even going to write a sequil?
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