Reviews for A Teenaged Snape?
SiriuslySexySeveremus chapter 21 . 12/13/2010
lol i love the story and hate to see it end this way! I knew Eriv and Charlette were terrible. I like how you made Sev really sexy and hot, gosh I want my own Sev!
Black Serpentine chapter 5 . 12/12/2010
lol who wouldn't wanna see a hot,teenage Severus in his boxers?... gr... I wanna be Hermione... lucky git...
JaneA0202 chapter 21 . 11/24/2010
Im sad that you couldnt finish this story in "normal way"

About this chapter, well I expected different things...but it still had a great plot.
JaneA0202 chapter 18 . 11/24/2010
too fast, but I should probably get used to it...

but Im glad that Albus approves.
JaneA0202 chapter 17 . 11/24/2010
also its weird that one moment he is furious because Charlotte was cheating on him and the next he is in love with Hermione...I dont like that fast changes of events...even in telenovelas it isnt so fast...
JaneA0202 chapter 15 . 11/24/2010
Im not very happy right now...dont like anything muggle themed at Hogwarts...just idea of karaoke and Hermione or Severus performing makes me sick...

well and Charlotte and Eric...If I had my way, I would erase them from the story..
JaneA0202 chapter 10 . 11/24/2010
Im not happy with that Eric and Charlotte...they are weird, especially Charlotte...and I have a bad feeling that they are death eaters in disguise or something like that :D
JaneA0202 chapter 5 . 11/24/2010
I think that Severus is a bit too much OOC...I know he should be that way, so Hermione wont suspect him that he is professor Snape, but still, its a bit weird.
JaneA0202 chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
this is interesting story! Its great idea to have Snape in Hermiones age but with all memories.

about this chapter- it was good, except that yelling from Hermione...it made her look like spoiled bookworm who cares only about being head girl...
Wendy Cates chapter 21 . 11/1/2010
I loved it! You did a very good job! Officially one of my favorite stories!
contton-candy-willruletheworld chapter 3 . 9/29/2010
Herpies! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! everybody has indside jokes about herpies, so, it makes me giggle.
contton-candy-willruletheworld chapter 2 . 9/29/2010
hehe, severus has hormones. lol red. hehehe
Rori Potter chapter 21 . 6/16/2009
That was a great story.
Barb8 chapter 21 . 11/27/2008
I loved the story but it was ruined in the last chapter. It seems to me that you crammed 2-3 chapters in one and did a dishonest thing to this wonderful story. I wish you would go back and do it the justice it deserves.
jcfreak89 chapter 20 . 10/10/2008
Ok apparantly I already commented on your story on chapter 21. I used to be momsangel but I changed my pen name. Long story. I already wrote you a personal message about this too. But I think that it would be amazing if you would...continue the story. I don't know where you are in life, but if you could just redo the ending and add like two more chapters, so you have 23 chapters instead, even 22, would be great! And I'm sure I speak for everone when I say we would love you forever.

Please

Please

PLEASE!

Seriously my life would stop if you didn't fix the ending. Because you are a fantastic writer. I don't even know if you are still on this site or anything like that. But seriously...

jcfreak89 (Formerly momsangel)
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