Reviews for Gunpowder Smoke
Jollypants Silvers chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
that's so cute! i love it : )
Ohohen chapter 1 . 9/4/2005 it!
AngolMoaChan chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
this is really sweet! RoyxRiza and EdWin are my two favorite pairings! You should add more! I know a lot of people who love to read drabbles! :3
Flava Sava chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
Invader Sam chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
Short but very well written. _ Keep up the good work!
ShiroKitsune chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
I love the last line of this. It's just plainly cute. I love the Royais. I love them good.
Museless Shinigami chapter 1 . 2/26/2005
was a great story.I like it's concept.
callmecrazy chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
"Because she is Riza Hawkeye and he'll kiss her anyway."

Classic line! Truly classic! Love it!

Consider: "Because he is Roy Mustang and he will kiss her anyway."


Sorry. Moment. Ahem. Yes.

Your portrayal of Roy and Riza is awesome, and so true for both of them. I never doubt that Riza has a passionate side.
Aethra Caelis chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Oh! *Gushes* That is so sweet! Simple, yet so sweet!

You did a great job at the little characterizations! Very nice fic!
O'Ylia chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
Because she is Riza Hawkeye and he’ll kiss her anyway.

So Roy. Nicely written and sweet enough to satisfy. Thumbs up!
FullMetalShadow chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
aw! one of my fave pairing and you did it so well :)

keep it up! ;D