Reviews for Falling
mouse chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
wow...just wow...that was so beautiful...wow
Nina Windia chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Oh, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! This is a short but gorgeous piece of writing, and so sad too. :(
starkmaddness chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
... *speechless* this is by far the best haibane renmei fanfic i've ever read... your take on how the crow came to gile is well thought out loved Tori, he was characterized beautifully. thax for writing this, fav definiteLY!
pRettY-iN-bLacK21 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Wow. . . Tragic, but great. A real work of art. Five stars! XD
Sinaba chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
Its really good, i hope u write more to the story i'd like to see if they acctually meet or not
Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
That was so sad but it really relates to the anime well. He would be the crow, trying to stop her from falling and finding her again in the well.
xxxNikki-Kinoxxx chapter 1 . 4/3/2006
:sniff: aw. that was really sweet. I would have never really thought her life could have been like that before she became a Haibane but as I read it it doesn't really surprise me. Great Job at describing his feelings. I loved the whole thing. including the end
Ammethystine chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Lovely!

You know, I imagined something like this when I watched the crows... and Crow. I felt like this could have happened... and you wrote it! You are the best!
Gamer chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
EXELENT! no other words needed to describe such an amazing story!
Koshirou chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
wow, you are a really great author. i honestly cried while reading this. you did a great job at intertwining the story with your fic. and, like you, i think that rakka's story is, by far, much more compelling then anything else in the anime. Haibane Renmei is one of my favorite anime and i think you did a great job with a fanfic that was based on it.

good luck on future fics,

-kanamey
Valnott chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
Ah! OMG! I loved it. Sorry for the yelling. Oh and by the way i'm the sister of this pename user. Please let him end up in Old Home please oh please let him end up there. And either allow him to remember Rakka or don't i frankly don't care as long as they are together i'm happy. Oh, did i sense that Tori loved Rakka or whatever her name was in her past life. I'm just giving u ideas, but please let the story be how u want to tell it. I'm am begging u to continue ur story and update soon, please. Bye!
zigguratank chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
*sniffle* omg...this story is the sweetest thing i've ever read! it's better than reading those little messages in the cards at Hallmark. so *sniffle* sweet! *bursts into tears* i love it!
Shade Eido chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
*burst into tears*... That was beautiful.. Poor Rakka.. poor, poor Rakka.. But, I feel sorry for Tori as well.I think the part that got me crying the most was the lines..

"I can't stay here without you. I am gonna follows you.. Even if you forget me.." It rememinded me how wonderous and tragic love is.. Another great work of art from one my favorite artist. _
yakuri-moe chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
OMG! so so so so so angsty! T_T

I've seen the Haibane Renmei series, and deep down, it truly is a very sad anime, and just like you i felt tears in my eyes sometimes T_T

i really liked your fanfic because i too wondered who could that crow been? in the anime it saved Rakka from her sins, but they never specified who it was, or what rol it had in rakka's previous life. That's why your story caught my attention, and it is really sad (rakka's life major sucked _
kisa-san chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
wah wahah wah it is so sad plz write more of this story plz plz plz plz plz plz plz it sounds so sad that T-T ...

but plz write more

sign,

kisa-san
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