Reviews for Closure
Mrs. Nose chapter 8 . 12/22/2015
I was expecting him to realize his feelings, but oh, well.
Nice fanfic nonetheless
Mrs. Nose chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
What. That was a huge turn-off.
Worst reaction ever D:
Misty should've beat him up some more, that wasn't enough!
Mrs. Nose chapter 6 . 12/22/2015
Only Ash could mess up that bad lol
Now he's dead meat.
Mrs. Nose chapter 5 . 12/22/2015
I thought Ash wouldn't be brave enough to read the rest of her diary LOL
Not only because she'll absolutely kill him when she finds out, but also because he seems afraid of his feelings for her.
I was also surprised that she wasn't mad at what he said and only blamed herself :o
Mrs. Nose chapter 4 . 12/22/2015
It started funny, what with Ash taking 5h to eat lunch.
But then... Wow, that was horrible of him :O
I bet it'll take a long time for Misty to forgive him.
Mrs. Nose chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Misty's being really mean to her guest XD
Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Here I am again!
lol, it's a wonder Ash wasn't hurt by the fact Misty was refusing him a place to stay so badly lol
Holly M chapter 8 . 8/23/2015
FLAMETHROWER! Just kidding! Tee-hee! ;) I liked it. :)
jeannot1978 chapter 8 . 3/28/2014
a sequel would be nice. ash will get a pokegear and misty's number is in it.
brandonfmanning chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
I am going to kill u
brandonfmanning chapter 4 . 3/23/2014
U are some heart less
MistyfagNorway chapter 7 . 5/29/2013
I liek mudkipz and this ending.

It remains somewhat canon to the whole "Ash still have to travel and do shit" and feeds my need for closure, somewhat.

GG Players. GG.
MistyfagNorway chapter 4 . 5/29/2013
Fuck you. Fuck you. Fuck you.

A quick google search and this is what I get?!

Love the story though.
00ff000 chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Hi again. Stupid 24h PM rule didnt let me answer your kind message. I had a giant smile when I read it but I'll focus on that when I'm able to reply properly.

Just letting you know I already did read a lot of your fics...I cant remember them all because I dont get attached to titles :p. I'll review this first because I remember and then proceed since I just created an account finally.

I loved this until the end(screw the age group, its nice but not a must, actually Im a couple years younger than you ).

Yes I said...until. It left me wanting for more..the title was closure but didnt feel like that at all at the end..

BUT I REALIZED! It has a sequel. I shall haste to read it.

Sorry Im a sucker for happy endings. Real life already sucks.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/9/2011
Its amazing dude
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