|Reviews for Nobody's Angel|
| I'mSecretlyANinjaTimeLord chapter 13 . 10/28/2009
hey GerbilsRockMySocks here sayin that u inspured me to write ma own fan fic av reviewed another story of yours a think this ones legendary if u could read and review ma fan fic am in desperate need of tips and ma first 1s not doin so gd
Hope to hear from you GerbiksRockmySocks
| Paupu chapter 20 . 8/26/2007
That was a good story! D The only thing I didn't like was that the tense changed from past to present xD Great job!
| SafirePhoenix chapter 20 . 12/27/2006
you should add an epilogue with yuna. she has to rush in with the cavalry because baralai practically told her riku was dead.
| Rachel chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
Great Fic...one of the best i'v ever read. keep up the good work! cant wait to read the follow-up!
| ms. apocalypse chapter 20 . 8/6/2006
Rikku/Baralai, eh? This is actually the first time I've ever read one.
I'm very impressed. I liked your characterization of Baralai. While I'm not very familiar with his character, being only about half-finished with X-2, he seems to be IC.
While I think that Rikku's a bit too depressed to be IC, she's going through a hard time and it's understandable. But, even at 21, I'd imagine Rikku to say "owie" more often then you portrayed her as.
But it's still a very good story. Nice job
| Mandy chapter 20 . 7/26/2006
This was one of the best stories I have read on this site. I love Baralai and Rikku pairings, it has a wonderful feeling of innocence about them. I wish that the story didn't end, it is just well written and well told. I'd love to read more of your works.
| BlazingxSoul chapter 20 . 2/11/2006
Aww! I loved this so much! Please, write again soon!
| Opaque.Heart chapter 20 . 10/25/2005
Hahahahaha! The Baralai and his pants line was too funny. 'My pants are still on, silly' I had a spasm right then. That was way back a few chapters but... hahahaha. I'm suck a dork.
| Opaque.Heart chapter 10 . 10/25/2005
I really hope that Gippal and Rikku get back together. G and Paine don't seem the least bit right for each other. But the Rikku and Baralai pairing is adorable! Good job, I can't wait to see what happens!
| queenofthedonuts chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
Cute story though:)
| Gippal's lover chapter 20 . 9/2/2005
Aww! This was such a cutie story! I've read so many Rikku/Gippal stories, but never one with Rikku/Baralai. You did a wonderful job, very well written. such a sweet ending.
| NO NAME chapter 20 . 7/23/2005
that was so for not reviewing throughout this entire story.
| DiamondLucy chapter 20 . 5/27/2005
it was so good! I don't like the thought of Paine and Gippal together, but Baralai and Rikku would make such a cute couple!
| FlyHigh4Life chapter 20 . 2/28/2005
*cries* it was so good...you should write a sequel...it would be so good...*cries some more*...I LOVED IT...
| Selffie chapter 20 . 1/19/2005
-stomps on picture of Gippal-
-stomps on picture of Gippal AND picture of Paine-