Reviews for Mainstreaming |
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Mei H. Kin chapter 14 . 11/22/2012 May I continue this story? I wanted to ask your permission before I went and continued it. Of course I would give you credit in the first 14 chapters. :) I've needed to touch up on my Yugeijutsu. |
Obsi chapter 14 . 10/30/2012 God, it's been ages since I last read this. I'm pretty sure you don't even check your account anymore, last dates around here and all. Let's just say that there are few fanfics of any kind that make me come back years later and reminiscence. Your TMNT stories touched me, and are close to my heart still. If you read this - I hope you are well. Thank you. - the guy (formerly gal) who haphazardly translated From the Sewers to the Streets into German more than six years ago. |
Cyllwen chapter 14 . 1/30/2007 hi friend. I really like your stuff but don't worry i'm not going to beg you to update. i know what it is like...it is amazing if i finish a poem the way my life is. I just wanted to give you a thumbs up. |
Almath3a chapter 14 . 11/3/2006 i yust have finisher reading this story, and yust wantedt to tell you i really liked reading it, especially the shenes in the school, and the tournamend. engelina! |
Obsidian Demon chapter 14 . 4/24/2006 First of all - English is not my native language, so... if you find grammar or spelling mistakes, you may keep them. I don't need them, there are enough of them around here. Seeing the date of this, I guess it's a little late to comment on it, but I'll try to let you know what I think of your story, anyway. Ahem. It's great to see that someone was able to take the nineteen-eightieths series, recognize the really awful parts of it, and dare to just leave them out and fill the gaps with parts of better turtle shows/comics - or own ideas that fit in _logically_. (That is what you did, didn't you? Otherwise I really have to go down to the basement and fetch those tapes an comic books again. Oh well, I was about to do that anyway.) Instead of just taking the guys and putting them in some unlikely setting, or let them react to such a situation in an even more unlikely way, you manage to make them come alive. You pulled them out of their comic book environment and into a world more similar to ours somehow, keeping them true to themselves anyway, making their step out of the sewer and into the outside world believable. In particular, I'm quite fond of the way you portrayed Raphael, let him keep his cynic self without letting him become angsty (*shudder*). I've read too much of that by now, and it just didn't suit him, just wasn't him. You've reminded of why I always liked him best. It's been a while since fanfiction succeeded in doing so. Good Ninja Turtles fiction is hard to come by. What you wrote... It's different, close to AU - which usually scares me away -, but it still definitely _is_ TMNT. That's what I love about it. Thanks for this story and those connected to it. *bows* |
Jessiy Landroz chapter 14 . 9/10/2005 OMG! incomplete? HOW COULD YOU! *dies* okay, I'm over the dramatics, but really! I need to knwo what happnes! first day of school is half way done, and witht he katare jerk sharing the school ground, hell's coming close, no? wonder if Raph's gonna keep a lid on it till they get back home, and whatever happned to the lair? is it bare-empty now, or just kept liek a safty-zone in case of emergancies, or something? |
Jessiy Landroz chapter 10 . 9/10/2005 well now, this looks intresting, almost up to the end so far, huh? I'm guessing the house repairs are on hold untill Leo comes back home witht eh trophy, yup yup~ this is gonna be fun! |
Jessiy Landroz chapter 7 . 9/10/2005 wow! Leo in a Katare compatetion? cool! he's kick butt, alright! at least it's better than McDonald, I guess ; |
Jessiy Landroz chapter 4 . 9/10/2005 woo hoo~ I'm getting the hint the guys are gonna get the workout of thier lives, fixing this little place up XD wonder how the old man will handle the guys moving around ninja speed and stuff, with Mike's cooking, Leo and Raph's strength, combined with Donny's brain, things are gonna change~ |
Jessiy Landroz chapter 1 . 9/10/2005 well, this seems liek a very intrsting story, I dont think I've seen it around before... with Donny being all nice, distracted but nice, I'm thinking things might actually look up to the old man, yes? :3 |
Shadis DaKitty chapter 14 . 3/23/2005 Hey!poke poke Finish up!I want to read more! YOu have a good stoytelling talent and should keep writing |
Annere chapter 14 . 3/2/2005 Hey- this is the best Turtle story Iv read so far! KJeep it up! Nd please finish it! (Turtle writres never seem to finish stories...!) Lookin forward to readin the rest! |
governmentcontractor chapter 14 . 2/10/2005 As usual, another superb chapter. From Leo's panic attack (completely in character) to the instances of high school bigotry from both teachers and students, this is beautifully handled. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter. J. |
Jill chapter 13 . 2/10/2005 I really love this story. It's amazing. GO STEELERS! I'm real happy Mikey was wearing a Pittsburgh sweatshirt... that was great! :D However, you'd think that being New Yorkers, they'd root for Giants or Jets, but nevertheless, GO STEELERS! (Ok, I know the season's over and everything, but I'm a loyal fan all year ;D )Ok, back to reviewing. Great story. Keep up the good work. I like your take on things and how they would live topside interacting with society. Really interesting. I would have expected them to be extremely wary to move up, though, because of people wanting to dissect them or something, but oh well. Great story! |
chibiroseangel chapter 14 . 2/9/2005 What that the end of the story? It couldn't be could it? Oh please say you've got more! I was really enjoying this! Kudos! |