Reviews for Hot Pursuit |
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![]() ![]() Funny and cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute one shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh there has to be a sequel to this, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS WAS HILARIOUS! GREAT JOB XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ermygawd! Such SUCH a cute story! Very nicely written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love reading this story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this please do a sequel this is my favorite married story ever! PLEASE DO MORE! IM BEGGING U! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute, loved it :) |
![]() ![]() God I can't this out of my mind it tots Good kk |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I did not expect him to get revenge with her own weapon- the water gun! Darn! I was sort of hoping that the crying she did would work to convince him of her innocence! She was just having some fun... and now he is too! I love the part where she was crying though because he totally fell for it hook, line, and sinker! He was feeling all guilty and then she used that moment to take advantage of him letting his guard down. She shot him! She shot him in the head! Hahahaha! Anyways, I would love if you made a sequel for this story, but I prefer a sequel for the key once since this wasn't a cliff hanger. However, I definitely wouldn't complain if you decided to make a sequel! I would just start reading away! AMUTO FOREVER! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i knew he was gonna spray on her in the end! nyahahahahaha! i love it! more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Logged in just to write about how perfect I thought thiis story was. Would love to read a full length one. I was smiling the entire time. Ugh, such a great one-shot! |