|Reviews for Along Came A Spider|
| Nimrodel chapter 3 . 10/9/2004
I adore your twins! I am completely impassioned by Elladan and I always seek new histories in your page. This as the other ones, is incredible.
I am with the poor a lot of feather El . Elrohir is always in the threshold. Fortunately it possesses your lover Elladan to take care of him.
I am anxious for the continuation.
| JastaElf chapter 3 . 10/9/2004
Ai! Dead and yet not-dead... refusing Namo's call... oh GODS the angst-level is just wonderful... (grin) And very beautifully written. I loved the fact that he was concentrating so hard, he didn't even realize Elrohir was back among the living... and the level of humour was exactly what was needed in the aftermath.
I'm officially "dying" to know what happens next... will Elladan come give me mouth-to-mouth as well? (grin-Can't believe I said that...)
| faceted-mind chapter 2 . 10/8/2004
no... *sniffle* you can't...
| Sunn-Kissed chapter 2 . 10/7/2004
Nonononono...stay away from the light! And the hand. Avoid it all, Elrohir!
I can't imagine what it would be like for Elladan if Elrohir died...I bet El would die of a broken heart. At least, I'm hoping that I know you won't kill him, seeing as that would mess up your whole timeline.
I love the way you right the twins. It's so believable. And, of course, Legolas to.
| Kia chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
ah *faints* this is the most evil cliffie I ever ocured *is wobbling around*
my poor 'Ro *snif* - I can't wait to read on :-)
| dragonfly chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
WHAT? No, no, no!
| Flashgriffin chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
NOO! You can't have Elrohir die!
| aimless-37 chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
You have to be one of my favorite authors of stories about Elladan and Elrohir. This story has stong emotions and intense drama. I read both chapters and wow what a cliffhanger. I cannot wait to read more. Wonderful job!
| Lynn-G chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
DONT YOU DSRE KILL MY 'RO!
cant wait for the next chap.
| JastaElf chapter 2 . 10/5/2004
*staring at the screen in shock*
Oh my ERU, she killed Elrohir!
Or wait, the spider did... but Jay wrote it, enabling the spider... oh my... I am so confused! (grin) Oh, what a good chapter. So many things going on... such wonderful angst... you didn't put a death warning on it, so I'm assuming Namo has some idea of something to do... Ep!
Oh Gods, poor Elladan is going to go through Heck... wow. The description of the Passing Over was wonderful!
And as always, it was nice to see Legolas, even in passing... (grin)
Oh I hope there's an update soon! But thanks for this one, it's very gripping and well done!
| MysticHeero chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Hey Jay, I read this over the weekend and have only just been able to access But i love this ficcie already and I hope that chapter two is posted up very very soon. Poor El, getting bitten and all, but what will happen next? Please update soon. Please! Okay, I've exhausted my begging grotto for the day and i need something to eat badly! I haven't eaten anything for the last 5hours and now I'm starving. So toodles and Ta me darlin' and i'll hear from ye soon (or at least I had better get an alert off for ye updating soon.).
Keep on typing the honey
| Lynn-G chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
oh how i love your writing!
plz update soon!
| faceted-mind chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
| Flashgriffin chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Uh oh... But you know, saying that one or another of the twins, or Legolas, will die in each story isn't really effective when you write them all in the past. I wonder what will happen! Please keep writing!
| Vicki Turner chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
EEK! NOT ELROHIR! Oh poor poor El! Both of them! Eek! I'm really nervous right now. you better post more and SOON!