|Reviews for Along Came A Spider|
| MysticHeero chapter 1 . 10/4/2004
Hey Jay, I read this over the weekend and have only just been able to access But i love this ficcie already and I hope that chapter two is posted up very very soon. Poor El, getting bitten and all, but what will happen next? Please update soon. Please! Okay, I've exhausted my begging grotto for the day and i need something to eat badly! I haven't eaten anything for the last 5hours and now I'm starving. So toodles and Ta me darlin' and i'll hear from ye soon (or at least I had better get an alert off for ye updating soon.).
Keep on typing the honey
| Lynn-G chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
oh how i love your writing!
plz update soon!
| faceted-mind chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
| Flashgriffin chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
Uh oh... But you know, saying that one or another of the twins, or Legolas, will die in each story isn't really effective when you write them all in the past. I wonder what will happen! Please keep writing!
| Vicki Turner chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
EEK! NOT ELROHIR! Oh poor poor El! Both of them! Eek! I'm really nervous right now. you better post more and SOON!
| JastaElf chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
YAY! You are writing thw backstory! YAY!
Ai, oh NO! Elrohir's been bitten-by one of the BAD gorliante spiders! (excellent name, BTW...) Well, we knew that was coming, but still, it is frightening and icky. (I hate spiders. YUCK!) The imagery of the hundreds of spiders and the many different ways they attack was superlative-and really, really creepy! *shudder*
I can't wait to see where you go with this. I know Thranduil and Legolas will eventually figure in it, so I'm of course delighted... (grin) By the way, the conversation between the Twins about not calling the place Mirkwood was an inspired piece of writing. Not enough people make mention of such things! I know if I were from there, I would hate hearing my home called by such a dire name...
Thanks for the new tale!